托福寫作題目

　　Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　托福寫作范文:環(huán)境的破壞

　　While the past few centuries have witnessed increasingly better quality of human life, human activity is doing more and more harm to the Earth. Natural resources are being depleted and pollution is being created as a result of development of technology. Natural areas are being damaged as a result of urban expansion to populate more people.

　　First, we harm the Earth by using more and more natural resources. If we fell too many trees at one time to build

　　houses and make paper, or if we cut down trees before they grow to maturity, they can hardly grow back in time. As worrisome as overcutting of trees is overfishing. With improved technology and greater drive for money, fish of all kinds are being over hunted, reducing the biomass of some fish to the verge of extinction. Whaling seems a most irksome issue. While most countries argue against it, some countries go whaling to extremes. We often take it for granted that we have unlimited natural resources and use them in a wasteful manner, bringing about great losses.

　　Second, we damage the Earth by producing pollution in all forms. Factories pollute water and the air. Vehicles pollute the air. Nuclear-related and electronic products are playing an increasingly big role in polluting the air, especially when we dispose of related waste carelessly. We take it for granted that Nature can help clean everything, but it can not.

　　Third, expanding towns and cities are taking up more and more land. As populations flood to cities, new houses and stores have to be built to accommodate their needs. Land that was good for farming has now become factories and apartment buildings. We seem to take it for granted that we have unlimited land, but we do not.

　　In summary, human activity seems to be going at the expense of the Earth in various ways. However, our survival depends on the Earth

　　托福寫作解析

　　While the past few centuries have witnessed increasingly better quality of human life, human activity is doing more and more harm to the Earth. Natural resources are being depleted and pollution is being created as a result of development of technology. Natural areas are being damaged as a result of urban expansion to populate more people.

　　While the past few centuries have witnessed increasingly better quality of human life, (while引導詞，表對比關系;主語是the past few centuries，要學會物化主語;這句話可以直接背下來套用在科技+政府+社會等話題開頭段，“盡管過去的幾個世紀見證了人們生活水平的不斷提高)human activity is doing more and more harm to the Earth.

　　2. Natural resources are being depleted(耗盡) and pollution is being created as a result of(由于=as a consequence of= due to=owing to) development of technology.

　　3. Natural areas are being damaged as a result of urban expansion(城市擴張) to populate more people.

　　First, we harm the Earth by using more and more natural resources. If we fell too many trees at one time to build houses and make paper, or if we cut down trees before they grow to maturity, they can hardly grow back in time. As worrisome as overcutting of trees is overfishing. With improved technology and greater drive for money, fish of all kinds are being over hunted, reducing the biomass of some fish to the verge of extinction. Whaling seems a most irksome issue. While most countries argue against it, some countries go whaling to extremes. We often take it for granted that we have unlimited natural resources and use them in a wasteful manner, bringing about great losses.

　　1. First, we harm the Earth by using more and more natural resources.

　　主題句1：利用自然資源-->破壞地球

　　2. If we fell(砍伐樹木，fell trees=cut down trees) too many trees at one time to build houses and make paper, or if we cut down trees(砍伐樹木) before they grow to maturity(n.成熟), they can hardly grow back in time(及時).

　　自然資源1 - 破壞森林資源

　　3. As worrisome as overcutting of trees is overfishing. (as+adj+as A is B“和A一樣adj的是B)

　　“和過度砍伐樹木一樣令人擔憂的是過度捕撈”

　　4. With improved technology and greater drive(動機=motive=motivation) for money, fish of all kinds are being over hunted(過度捕獵), reducing the biomass(生物量) of some fish tothe verge of extinction.(reduce the biomass of sth to the verge of extinction將...的數(shù)量減少到滅絕邊緣)

　　5. Whaling(捕鯨) seems a most irksome(令人厭煩的=troublesome=worrisome) issue.

　　6. While(引導詞“盡管”，表對比關系) most countries argue against it, some countries go whaling to extremes(go sth to extremes 做某事過火).

　　自然資源2 - 過度捕撈

　　7. We often take it for granted(take sth for granted把某事認為是理所當然的) that we have unlimited natural resources and use them in a wasteful manner, bringing about(帶來) great losses.

　　結論1

　　Second, we damage the Earth by producing pollution in all forms. Factories pollute water and the air. Vehicles pollute the air. Nuclear-related and electronic products are playing an increasingly big role in polluting the air, especially when we dispose of related waste carelessly. We take it for granted that Nature can help clean everything, but it can not.

　　1. Second, we damage the Earth by producing pollution in all forms.

　　主題句2：產生各種形式的污染-->破壞地球

　　2. Factories pollute water and the air.

　　污染形式1 - 工廠

　　3. Vehicles pollute the air.

　　污染形式2 - 汽車

　　4. Nuclear-related and electronic products are playing an increasingly big role in(在...中扮演越來越重要的角色) polluting the air, especially when we dispose of(處理) related waste carelessly.

　　污染形式3-核相關的和電子產品

　　5. We take it for granted that Nature can help clean everything, but it can not.

　　結論2-注意參考上一段結尾句

　　Third, expanding towns and cities are taking up more and more land. As populations flood to cities, new houses and stores have to be built to accommodate their needs. Land that was good for farming has now become factories and apartment buildings. We seem to take it for granted that we have unlimited land, but we do not.

　　1. Third, expanding towns and cities(doing做主語，擴大城鎮(zhèn)) aretaking up(占據(jù)) more and more land.

　　主題句3：城鎮(zhèn)擴張-->破壞地球

　　2. As populations flood to(涌入) cities, new houses and stores have to be built to accommodate their needs(迎合他們的需求).

　　解釋句1： 人口增加-->建造更多住房和商店

　　3. Land that was good for farming has now become factories and apartment buildings.

　　解釋句2：農業(yè)用地-->變成工廠和公寓

　　4. We seem to take it for granted that we have unlimited land, but we do not.

　　結論3-注意參考前兩段結尾句

　　In summary, human activity seems to be going at the expense of the Earth in various ways. However, our survival depends on the Earth, including natural areas and natural resources, so we have to venerate the Earth.

　　1. In summary, human activity seems to be going at the expense of(以...為代價) the Earth in various ways.

　　2. However, our survival depends on the Earth, including natural areas and natural resources, so we have to venerate(尊敬) the Earth.

　　, including natural areas and natural resources, so we have to venerate the Earth.