Ⅱ．修改病句 (15 points,3 points each)

Correct the errors in the following sentences.

Example: After seeing an offensive mouthwash ad on television. I resolved never to buy that brand again.

After seeing an offensive mouthwash ad on television， I resolved never to buy that brand again.

11． A new blouse in a fashionable color can update an old outfit; in contrast, adding dramatic jewelry or an attractive scarf can make an old outfit seem new.

12． Judging by Meg’s party, her parents are irresponsible. First of all, there is no adult supervision, for example, wine and beer are served.

13． He said that they should make full use of the water power of the river. And that a small reservoir should be built.

14． My hometown is closer to Beijing than Shijiazhuang.

15． After correcting all the mistakes, the second draft of the paper was much better than the first.