【書面表達(dá)答題“五步曲”】
第一步:認(rèn)真審題,確定文章體裁、主題。
第二步:在草稿紙上根據(jù)題目要求列出規(guī)定的要點(diǎn),然后列出每個(gè)要點(diǎn)所需短語或句型,并適當(dāng)拓展。注意選取合適的時(shí)態(tài)。
第三步:將所列語言材料組合寫成連貫通順的文章。注意使用合適的連詞和承上啟下的句子。注意開頭點(diǎn)題,結(jié)尾要有合適的結(jié)束語。
第四步:仔細(xì)讀一遍草稿,挑出錯(cuò)誤,對(duì)拿不準(zhǔn)的句子或詞語進(jìn)行修改或刪減。(寧缺毋濫)注意控制詞數(shù)(若要求60~80詞,則75詞左右最佳)。
第五步:將修改無誤的短文工整地謄抄在卷面上。
【話題鏈接】
針對(duì)遵義近幾年書面表達(dá)的考情,我們對(duì)“觀點(diǎn)類”“做法類”“校園生活類”“家庭生活與情感類”這四種不同的話題寫作角度有著不同的解題方法與技巧,具體如下:
話題1 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)類 針對(duì)某一現(xiàn)象或話題發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn),如2016和2014遵義真題。
【常見短語及句型】
·Some believe that…,while others think that…有些人相信……,而有些人認(rèn)為……
·There are two sides of opinion of it,one is…,the other is…關(guān)于這點(diǎn)有兩方面,一是……,另一個(gè)是……
·As far as I am concerned/in my opinion(view)我認(rèn)為……
·From my point of view,I think…在我看來……
·The reason why…is that… ……的原因是……
·For one thing,…for another…一方面,……另一方面,……
·On one hand,…On the other hand,…一方面,……另一方面,……
·First,…Second,…Last but not least,…首先,……其次,……最后但同樣重要的是,……
·From all what I said,I agree to the thought that…從所有我所說的來看,我同意……的看法
·In my view,I hold the point of view that…在我看來,我支持……的觀點(diǎn)
·I am sure my opinion is both…and…我相信我的觀點(diǎn)既……又……
·It is very important/difficult/useful/exciting to do…做……很重要/困難/有用/令人激動(dòng)
話題2 做法類 針對(duì)某一現(xiàn)象或事件中學(xué)生該怎么做。如2015遵義真題。
【常見短語及句型】
We should get up early.我們應(yīng)該早起。
·don't push each other when we go downstairs 下樓時(shí)不要互相推擠
·pay attention to traffic rules 注意交通規(guī)則
·obey the traffic/public rules 遵守交通/公共規(guī)則
·wait in line 排隊(duì)
·don't play with fire 不要玩火
·call for help 尋求幫助
·save food 節(jié)約食物
·eat up 吃光
·pick up 撿起
·have a good habit 有一個(gè)良好的習(xí)慣
·take action together 一起行動(dòng)起來
·go to bed early and get up early 早睡早起
·stay up 熬夜
·do more exercise 多做運(yùn)動(dòng)
·eat more fruit and vegetables 多吃水果蔬菜
·keep away from 遠(yuǎn)離
·respect the teachers and the old 尊敬師長
·eat a balanced diet 均衡飲食
·eat less junk food 少吃垃圾食品
·be supposed to care for 應(yīng)該關(guān)心……
·respect others 尊重他人
話題3 校園生活類 記敘校園學(xué)習(xí)或生活有關(guān)的事件。如2012、2013遵義真題。
【常見短語及句型】
This is my worst day.這是我最糟糕的一天。
·How time flies!時(shí)光飛逝!
·I have never expressed my thanks and respect to you.我從未對(duì)你表達(dá)過我的謝意和敬意。
·Thank you very much for everything you've done for me.非常感謝你為我所做的一切。
·My middle school life is meaningful and colorful.I will never forget it.我的中學(xué)生活豐富多彩。我將永遠(yuǎn)都不會(huì)忘記。
·I am so proud that I made it.我很自豪我成功了。
·I kept practicing doing our best to help people who need help.我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該盡自己最大的努力幫助那些需要幫助的人。
·If everyone helps others,the world will become much more beautiful!如果每個(gè)人都去幫助別人,世界將會(huì)更加美好!
·This is my day.It's a funny day.How about you?這就是我的一天。很有趣的一天,你呢?
·I really had a good time on my…birthday.I will treasure it forever.在我……歲的生日上我真的很開心。我會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)珍惜它。
·I've learned a lot from it.我從中學(xué)到了很多。
話題4 家庭生活與情感類 對(duì)家人或朋友,老師表達(dá)感激之情。如2013遵義真題。
【常見短語和句型】
·Thanks very much for staying with me.
·I'm glad to receive your letter.
·I'm writing to say thanks to you.
·I still remember that we went to…together.
·I can't help remembering you,my dearest mother.
·It's your kindness and love that supports me a lot in my life.
·When I was…,I caught a cold and had a high fever in a midnight.
·It's you who took good care of me day and night until I recovered to be well again.
·You are the best mother in the world.
·I love you.
·I will try my best to work hard and be an excellent boy/girl to reward your love.
·I hope you are in good health forever.
,2017備考猜押
話題1 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)類
Group 1(2016西寧中考)
生活中有很多重要的東西,你認(rèn)為生活中最重要的東西是什么?為什么它是最重要的(至少說出三點(diǎn)理由)? 既然你認(rèn)為它最重要,該如何對(duì)待呢?請(qǐng)你以“The Most Important Thing in My Life” 為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。
The Most Important Thing in My Life
In my opinion,the most important thing in my life is time.However long one may live,his life has only a certain number of years.And once the time goes by,nobody can get it back.Even though he is the richest person in the world,he cannot afford to waste time,because it means that he is wasting his own life.
The only thing we can do is to make full use of our time.If we can finish more work with less time,we will have more time than other people.
Group 2(2016嘉興中考)
英語課上,你們開展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”為主題的討論,同學(xué)們把自己的想法寫在卡片上。請(qǐng)結(jié)合卡片信息,用英語寫一篇短文,向?疎nglish Learning 投稿。
注意:1.短文必須包括卡片所給的信息,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,并談?wù)勛约旱南敕ā?/P>
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息。
3.詞數(shù):80~100。短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
短文首句:In our English class,we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place.
In our English class,we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place.
We shared different ideas.
Some say it's better to spend more time with family.The more we get together,the better we understand each other.Family members should share happiness and worries.For example,when they have problems,we should try to cheer them up.Others believe it's important to give small presents to our family on their birthdays.
I think,showing love for family is necessary.If we help with housework,they may feel warmer.Sometimes,even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier.Though we're young,we can do much to make a happier home.
Group 3(2016紹興中考)
針對(duì)大部分高中要求學(xué)生住校的現(xiàn)狀,英語課上同學(xué)們就“Would you like to live in school?”這一話題展開調(diào)查,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容,用英語寫一篇短文,匯報(bào)調(diào)查結(jié)果,表達(dá)你的意愿并闡述理由。
大部分學(xué)生 |
愿意 |
1.方便與同學(xué)交流。 2.學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己。 |
一些學(xué)生 |
不愿意 |
1.在家能休息得更好。 2.與家人相處時(shí)間更長。 |
你 |
…… |
…… |
注意:1.短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
2.你的理由至少兩條。
3.詞數(shù):80~100。
4.短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:方便的convenient
短文首句:Would you like to live in school?We had a survey about it and here's the result.
Would you like to live in school?We had a survey about it and here's the result.Most students prefer to live in school because they find it convenient to communicate with their classmates.Also,they can learn how to look after themselves in this way.
However,some students think living at home is a better choice.The main reason is that they can relax better at home.Besides,they can spend more time with family members and get on better with them.
As for me,I'd like to live in school.That's because I can spend more time on study.What's more,it's wonderful experience to live with other classmates.
話題2 做法類
Group 4(2016宜賓中考)
班級(jí)將舉行英語演講比賽,請(qǐng)根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖以“How to Be Happy”為題目,寫一篇90詞左右的演講稿,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總數(shù))Good morning,everybody! The topic I want to talk about today is “How to Be Happy”.The following are my suggestions.
Good morning,everybody! The topic I want to talk about today is “How to Be Happy”.The following are my suggestions.
First of all,we should have life aims.When we have life aims,we can be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life.
Next,we must keep healthy.Without good health,we will have nothing.So we should have good life habits and try our best to take exercises every day.
Finally,we ought to be ready to help others.When we help those in trouble,we can get much happiness.
I believe if we do so,we can have a happy life.
That's what I want to share with you.Thank you!
Group 5(2016齊齊哈爾中考)
千百年來,書籍傳承著人類的文明。然而隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展,國民尤其是青少年對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的癡迷,使得閱讀漸漸地退出中學(xué)生的生活。就“如何在學(xué)生中開展閱讀活動(dòng)”,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語小短文。
提示:1.讀書的好處。
2.如何開展讀書活動(dòng):①在圖書館閱讀。②在班級(jí)建立圖書角。③同學(xué)間互借。④計(jì)劃閱讀時(shí)間及閱讀量。
3.……
要求:1.詞數(shù):80詞左右。
2.字跡工整,語言流暢,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,邏輯清晰。
3.文章內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
How to Have Reading Activities
How to Have Reading Activities?As we all know,it is important for us to read books.It not only make us know about the world but also helps us relax ourselves.I have some good advice about how to have reading activities.
First,we can read in our school library.There are all kinds of books there.It's a good place to read.Second,we can set up a reading corner in order to read at any time after class.Third,we can exchange books with one another.It helps develop our cooperation spirit.At last,it's necessary to plan reading time and the number of reading books.
All in all,we can benefit from colorful reading activities.
話題3 校園生活類
Group 6(2016吉林中考)
隨著中國的發(fā)展,世界各地掀起了“漢語熱”。作為中國人,我們更應(yīng)該學(xué)好漢語。請(qǐng)以“My Chinese Learning ”為題,寫一篇短文。
內(nèi)容包括:1.為什么要學(xué)好漢語?
2.談?wù)勛约簩W(xué)習(xí)漢語的經(jīng)歷。
3.介紹1-2條學(xué)習(xí)漢語的方法。
寫作要求:1.詞數(shù)80左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱與姓名。
My Chinese Learning
With the development of China,Chinese is becoming more and more popular.As native speakers,it's our duty to learn Chinese well.It helps us to understand Chinese culture better.
Chinese was one of the subjects when I was in a primary school.At first,I used to be weak in it,and I felt stressed out.My Chinese teacher advised me to read morning books.From then on,reading played an important role in my life,I often went to the library which was near my home.I made much more progress in Chinese.
I think reading books is a useful way of learning Chinese well.Also,it's necessary to practice writing as often as we can.Only in this way can we become a good Chinese learner.
Group 7(2016十堰中考)
這次考試結(jié)束后,你將怎樣度過一個(gè)有意義的暑假。請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇文章給你自己及小伙伴們一些好的建議。內(nèi)容必須包括以下要點(diǎn):
、僮哂H訪友和家人一起共度美好時(shí)光。②和好朋友一起看電影,聽音樂……③假期我們應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉,增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)。④你還有什么別的建議(至少兩條),詞數(shù)80-100。標(biāo)題和開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
How to Take a Meaningful Summer Vacation
after the Exam
It is necessary to take a meaningful summer vacation after the exam.There are kinds of activities for us to take part in.
First we can visit our friends and relatives or spend happy time with our family.Second,seeing a film,listening to music or hanging out with our friends will be also wonderful.Third,we should take more exercise to keep healthy.What's more,we had better review what we have learned in middle school.Finally,it is necessary for us to do some housework,which can help our parents a lot.
Above all,I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation.
Group 8(2015婁底中考)
親愛的同學(xué)們,三年的初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了,你們即將離開熟悉的母校和三年來朝夕相處并給予你們無盡關(guān)愛和幫助的老師們。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容,談?wù)勀闶煜さ挠⒄Z老師。
My English Teacher
Name |
Ms.Li |
Age |
35 |
Looks |
tall,beautiful,long curly hair |
Hobbies |
reading,singing, dancing, |
playing sports |
|
Character(性格) |
patient,friendly,warmhearted |
My comment(評(píng)價(jià)) |
a good teacher,a friend,a mother |
I have met many excellent teachers in junior school.One of them is my English teacher.Her name is Ms.Li.She__is__35__years__old.She__is__tall__and__beautiful__with__long__curly__hair.In__her__free__time,she__likes__reading,singing__and__dancing.She__also__enjoys__playing__sports.In__the__school__when__we__ask__her__questions,she__is__very__patient.Every__time__we__have__trouble,she__is__always__friendly__and__warmhearted__to__help__us.She__is__a__good__teacher.She__is__like__not__only__our__friend__but__also__our__mother.
Group 9(2016巴中中考)
用微笑播撒陽光,用行動(dòng)踐行夢(mèng)想,用無形的精神感染身邊每一個(gè)人——這就是“陽光少年”。請(qǐng)以“A Sunshine Teenager ”為題寫一篇英語短文介紹一位你身邊的“陽光少年”高飛。
要點(diǎn)提示:
1.善良友好,樂于助人,與人融洽相處。(如:去敬老院為老人讀報(bào),打掃房間,洗衣服)
2.不怕困難,勤奮好學(xué),喜歡讀書。
3.性格外向,積極參加各種文體活動(dòng)。(如:與同學(xué)踢球,參加各種俱樂部)
要求:
1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名和校名。
2.短文應(yīng)包含提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不要逐詞翻譯。
3.80詞左右,開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:get on well with;take an active part in
A Sunshine Teenager
Hello!My name is Xiao Ming.I'm studying in No.1 Middle School.Our school had an activity“Learn from Sunshine Teenagers”.From then on,there are many sunshine teenagers around us.
Gao Fei is one of them.He is__honest__and__kind.He__gets__on__well__with__others.He__is__always__ready__to__not__only__help__others__but__also__go__to__the__old__people's__home__to__do__something__for__the__old.He__reads__newspapers__for__them,cleans__their__rooms__and__washes__their__clothes.Also__he__is__warmhearted,active__and__outgoing.He__always__helps__his__parents__do__housework,such__as__doing__the__dishes,sweeping__the__floor__and__making__dinner.He__is__never__afraid__of__difficulties.He__works__very__hard__and__he__likes__reading.And__he__takes__part__in__all__kinds__of__sports.After__school,he__plays__football__with__his__classmates.And__he__joins__the__school__clubs,such__as__music__club,the__art__club__and__the__chess__club.He__learns__a__lot__from__all__his__activities.
Gao Fei is the best sunshine teenager in my heart.I should learn from him.
Group 10(2016畢節(jié)中考)
最近從媒體報(bào)道的一些家庭事件來看,孩子與父母的關(guān)系不和諧,隔閡越來越大,孩子普遍存在逆反心理。針對(duì)這個(gè)問題,某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)社開展了主題為“與父母和諧相處”的征文大賽。作為一名初中畢業(yè)生,你一定有自己的思想與辨別是非的基本能力,但你是否曾想過應(yīng)該怎樣和自己的父母相處呢?
請(qǐng)以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents?”為題寫一篇短文參加此次征文大賽。
寫作要點(diǎn)提示:
1.與父母和諧相處很重要。
2.與父母和諧相處的做法或建議:
(1)理解與尊重父母(如傾聽與有禮貌表達(dá)想法);
(2)多與父母交流(如分享快樂與傾訴煩惱);
(3)為父母做一些力所能及的事。
3.與父母和諧相處的感受。
How to Get on Well with Our Parents?
Recently it's reported that many children can't get on well with their parents.How can we get on well with our parents? Here are some suggestions.
First we should understand our parents and respect them.We should listen to them and express our ideas politely.Second we should often communicate with them.We can share our happiness with our parents and tell them about our worries.Third,we should help them to do some housework at home,we should help clean the room,do the dishes and so on.
If we follow these,I think we can get on well with them.
Group 11(2016金華中考)
假如你是No.2 Middle School的學(xué)生李華,下周,一批英國中學(xué)生將來你們學(xué)校進(jìn)行為期兩周的學(xué)習(xí)和交流。
請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn),寫一封自薦信,邀請(qǐng)其中一位學(xué)生來你家居住。
Key points |
|
(要點(diǎn)) |
Words and expressions for reference(參考詞匯) |
Like to do |
make friends,… |
Able to do |
good at,know English culture,… |
Family |
friendly,helpful,able to speak |
English… |
|
注意:1.短文內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)增加;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和姓名;3.詞數(shù):80~100;4.短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
短文首句:I am Li Hua,a student from No.2 Middle School.
Dear friend,
I am Li Hua,a boy(girl) student from No.2 Middle School.I'm writing to invite you to come and stay in my home during the next two weeks.
I like to make friends.This is the main reason I write this letter.I'm also good at sports and know something about British culture.Do you think we will have a lot to talk about?
As for my family,you will like it the moment you come.My parents are not only kind and friendly,but also helpful.Believe it or not,they can also speak English.
Do you think I am your first choice now?Look forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
話題4 家庭生活與情感類
Group 12(2016安順中考)
“感恩”是一個(gè)永恒的教育主題,孝敬父母是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。父愛如山高,母愛如海深。父母是每個(gè)人在世上最親的人,作為即將初中畢業(yè)的你,應(yīng)該感恩父母孝敬父母。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身情況,完成A、B兩項(xiàng)寫作任務(wù)。
要求:1.要點(diǎn)齊全,內(nèi)容連貫。
2.三段寫作,書寫整潔。
參考詞匯:1.help sb. with sth.幫忙……做……
2.understand 理解
3.communicate with sb.與某人交流
4.farm work 農(nóng)活
5.do some housework 做一些家務(wù)活
A.用完整的句子或簡略答語回答下列五個(gè)問題。
1.What do your father and mother do?
My__father__is__a__policeman__and__my__mother__is__a__housewife.
2.How old are your parents?
They're__forty__years__old.
3.What is your mother or father like?
My__mother__is__beautiful,kind__and__hardworking.My__father__is__handsome__and__brave.
4.Do you really love your parents?
Yes,I__do.
5.What should you do to thank your father and mother?
I__should__often__help__them__with__housework__or__farm__work__and__find__time__to__communicate__with__them,trying__our__best__to__understand__them.
B.請(qǐng)你根據(jù)自己對(duì)“感恩父母”的認(rèn)識(shí)和理解,結(jié)合以上五個(gè)問題,請(qǐng)以“How to Be Thankful to Our Parents”為題,寫一篇80—100詞的英語短文。不能照抄前面已有的材料,文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息。
How to Be Thankful to Our Parents
Our parents are the dearest people to us in the world.For me,I have a really happy family because I love my parents very much.
In fact,both my parents in their early forties are still young.My mother is a housewife and my father is a policeman,but they enjoy doing their work.Actually,my mother is beautiful, kind and hardworking.My father is handsome and brave,so I am proud of him.How can we thank our parents? I think we should often help them with housework or farm work and find time to communicate with them,trying our best to understand them.
In my opinion,we should always be grateful to our parents and do all that we can to thank them,do you think so?
Group 13(2016雅安中考)
假如你是 Millie,上星期你們搬家后, 你有了屬于自己的房間。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇 80—100 詞的短文介紹你的房間。短文開頭已經(jīng)給出, 但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
要求:1.房間是粉紅色的, 使人感覺溫暖。
2.有一張大而舒適的床和一張書桌。
3.書桌上有一臺(tái)電腦, 可以在學(xué)習(xí)之后放松自己。
4.你會(huì)打掃房間并保持房間整潔。
5.你的房間是你學(xué)習(xí)和放松最好的地方, 你非常喜歡它。
Last week,we moved a new house.I have my own room now.My__room__is__pink.It__makes__me__feel__comfortable__and__warm.There__is__a__big__and__comfortable__bed__and__a__desk__in__my__room.And__there__is__a__computer__on__the__desk.I__like__my__room.It__is__the__place__that__we__can__study__and__relax.I__will__clean__my__room__every__day__and__I__can__keep__it__clean__and__tidy.