年輕人類題目：

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.

　　范文(年輕人類)：

　　With the development of society, people nowadays are living in a relatively complete mechanism, yet some tiny but important aspects, which may be overlooked, need to be ameliorated by discussion. Some people may argue that youth seems to have no influence on current society. However, in my opinion, youth should still be taken into consideration when determining the future of the society in the long time run. My view point is based on the following reasons and examples.

　　Firstly, young people play a major role in improving the development of current society. For one thing, there are some special tasks, which are not only inevitable in its area but also needs high requirements of physical condition and cannot be accomplished by older people. For instance, when enrolling pilots, no matter for military affairs or civil aviation, it is strict with requirements of physical condition like eyesight and height, which older people may not satisfy. For another, young people also promote economic increase to some degree. Many enterprises aim at expanding the market of youth by developing more products, which largely increase the purchasing power of youth. And this method achieves big success especially in the electronic market.

　　Additionally, young people directly guide future direction of our society nowadays. As youth possesses creativity coming up with ideas, which sometimes seem to be ridiculous, it's entirely possible that one of those "wired idea" becomes breakthrough in a specific area. For instance, Steve Jobs, who has been described as the "Father of the Digital Revolution", once said he would like to invent a smartphone containing only one key. It was such a brave and creative idea and cannot be realized at that time. However, after continuously research, iPhone, which guides a new period of communication, came out.

　　Admittedly, despite older people are more experienced than youth, and are more possible to come up with more feasible and reasonable ideas when confronting difficulties, youth represents creativity, bravery and confidence, which are all inevitable during the process of the development of the society. Moreover, experience is based on accumulation of time and lessons, as older people also have no experience when they were young. Hence, blindly overlooking the important influence of youth, will finally lead to unexpected negative consequences.

　　Overall, youth represents the future of the society, and has potential influence to the society from the aspect of future development. Young people not only plays an important role, but also guides the future direction of our society.

　　范文所涉及詞匯講解(年輕人類)

　　with the development of 隨著…的發(fā)展

　　mechanism機(jī)制

　　overlooked被忽視的

　　be ameliorated by被…改善

　　have influence on對…的影響

　　current society當(dāng)今社會

　　take into consideration把…列入考慮之內(nèi)

　　in the long time run在長期內(nèi)

　　high requirement高要求

　　physical condition 身體狀況

　　be accomplished by 被…完成

　　pilot飛行員

　　no matter for無論對…

　　military affair軍事事件

　　civil aviation民用航空

　　be strict with對…嚴(yán)格要求

　　eyesight視力

　　expand market擴(kuò)大市場

　　purchase power購買能力

　　achieve big success獲得巨大的成功

　　electronic market電子市場

　　guide future direction指導(dǎo)未來方向

　　creativity創(chuàng)造力

　　come up with想出…

　　ridiculous荒謬的

　　breakthrough突破

　　be described as被描述為…

　　smartphone智能手機(jī)

　　one key一個按鍵

　　brave and creative idea勇敢和創(chuàng)造性的想法

　　guide 指引

　　feasible可行的

　　confront difficulty面對困難

　　bravery and confidence勇氣和信心

　　accumulation積累

　　lead to unexpected negative consequence導(dǎo)致意想不到的負(fù)面后果

　　范文分析(年輕人類)

　　文章組織結(jié)構(gòu)

　　本文總分論點間邏輯嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，是典型的五段式論文。總觀點出現(xiàn)在首段第三句，即作者認(rèn)為自己贊同青年人對社會發(fā)展的決策是有影響力的。隨后，作者用了兩個主體段和一個讓步段對總觀點進(jìn)行了論證。第一個分論點是青年在改善當(dāng)今社會發(fā)展中起到主要作用。第二個分論點是青年直接指引著社會未來的方向。

　　論點細(xì)節(jié)展開

　　本文的兩個主體段展開完全符合托福獨(dú)立寫作評分要求，按照主題句+說理論證+細(xì)節(jié)舉例的結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行分論點的展開。第一個主體段的細(xì)節(jié)舉例是，比如招聘飛行員的時候，對身體狀況要求非常嚴(yán)格，如視力和身高。而年長者可能不滿足這些條件。第二個主體段的細(xì)節(jié)舉例是，比如喬布斯想要發(fā)明一種只有一個按鍵的智能手機(jī)。這是一個勇敢且創(chuàng)新的想法，在當(dāng)時不能被實現(xiàn)。然而經(jīng)過他的不懈研究，一種新的溝通工具，iphone問世。

　　語言運(yùn)用質(zhì)量

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