2017年托福寫作模擬試題:為什么海灣鱘魚跳
托福綜合寫作Topic 議題:討論why gulf sturgeon jump | ||
Reading | Listening | |
Thesis 總論點(diǎn) | There are 3 reasons that can explain why gulf sturgeon jump out of water. | The 3 reasons mentioned in reading can be refuted as follows. |
Sub-point 1 | They are jumping for flying insects. | They are fully fed in gulf of Mexico in winter, so they do not eat anything in Florida in summer. Moreover, they are seeking food under the sea rather than in the air. |
Sub-point2 | They are jumping to get rid of parasites. | It is impossible because the parasites are in their bodies. In addition, some fish like sturgeon with parasites will not jump. |
Sub-point 3 | They are jumping for aggression. Many tourists have been hurt by sturgeon. | It is not convincing because they also jump while there are no ships. |
托福綜合寫作范文Sample answer:
Both the reading and listening are discussing 3 reasons that can explain why gulf sturgeon jump out of water. While the passage believes so, the lecturer casts doubt on the writer’s view from the 3 aspects below.
Firstly, in the reading passage, they are jumping for flying insects. On the contrary, the professor says that they are fully fed in gulf of Mexico in winter, so they do not eat anything in Florida in summer. Moreover, they are seeking food under the sea rather than in the air.
Secondly, the professor opposes reading’s idea that they are jumping to get rid of parasites. He states that it is impossible because the parasites are in their bodies. In addition, some fish like sturgeon with parasites will not jump.
Finally, the professor disapproves the reading’s idea that they are jumping for aggression. Many tourists have been hurt by sturgeon. However, the professor claims that it is not convincing because they also jump while there are no ships.