2016年9月3日托福獨立寫作真題回顧：

　　What is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local communities?

　　1. Plant trees and create parks

　　2. Persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers

　　3. Increase access to public transportation (such as buses and trains), and reduce the automobiles on roads

　　波波點睛：

　　題目為三選一題目，為了改善社區(qū)環(huán)境，人們采取的最有用的方式是以下哪種：1.種樹建立公園 2.說服商店停止使用塑料袋 3.增加公共交通減少私家車的使用。波波提示，三選一題目，有兩個要求：1.要明確提出自己的選擇 2. 在論述中要提到三個選擇。此題目要注意一點是，所有的落腳點都要在保護環(huán)境上，千萬不要跑題。波波推薦選擇第一個方式，即種樹和建公園，具體思路如下：

　　2016年9月3日托福獨立寫作范文參考：

　　With the sense of community becoming much stronger, how to protect the environment of local communities has never failed to attract the attention of the general public. Therefore, when it comes to which is the most feasible measure to help environment, among planting trees and building parks, encouraging local shops to stop using plastic bags, and improving public transportation, people's notions may vary from one to another. Towards such a long-running tug-of-war, I am inclined to claim that the first option is the best.

　　Firstly, growing trees and constructing parks can definitely help to ameliorate the environment. For one thing, more trees will contribute to the improvement of the air quality of the whole neighborhood. As is common sense, the prosperous industrial development has produced large amounts of waste gas, with the result that the haze and smoggy weather shroud quite frequently the major cities in our country. The current air condition necessitates the planting of trees, which can purify the contaminated air to a large extent. In other words, trees, the lung of the earth, play a vital role in absorbing some harmful gas and producing more fresh air through photosynthesis. For another, the public parks can be helpful to increase the biodiversity of the local community. Accompanying the rapid urbanization, an increasing number of natural lands have been utilized for constructing factories, shopping mall and skyscrapers, which greatly diminishes the natural habitats of animals, such as birds and squirrels. In this case, parks become the only place which can serve as habitats for those animals. Accordingly, the species of animals living here can become more diverse.

　　In addition, there are certain limitations for the other two options. Admittedly, reducing the use of plastic bags and making public transportation more accessible may also be conducive to the environmental protection in some degrees. To illustrate, if the plastic bags are prohibited, the so-called white pollution will be relieved. Also, easier access to public transportation means less use of private cars, which leads to the reduction of car exhaust. However, in comparison to planting trees and building parks, the above two measures enjoy less popularity among the residents of the community and thus are unlikely to be implemented. The underlying reason is that growing trees and constructing parks can create a more comfortable living environment while the other two choices can bring about more inconvenience. To be more specific, if shops stop the use of plastic shopping bags, the customers have to take a cloth bag while shopping. Also, taking public transportation will take longer time than driving the private cars, which means that commuters have to get up much earlier than before. It is self-evident that whether a policy can be carried out directly determines its effect, which is especially true of the above situation.

　　Taking what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that the most effective way of protecting environment in local communities is to plant trees and create parks.

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　　第三種方法， compared with the former two ways, increasing access to public transportation and reducing the amount of automobiles on local roads can play a more significant and effective role in improving the local environment.

　　三選一的題目，今年出現(xiàn)頻率極高，我酷學(xué)網(wǎng)八月份的托福寫作點題班1小時授課中，專門詳細剖析了3月19日，5月22日，6月25日，7月10號的三選一題目，指出，這絕對是今年的一大趨勢，童鞋們一定要認真準(zhǔn)備。

　　三選一的最重要破解要點就在于，你選擇了C, 一定要記得在論證的時候，使勁黑A, B. 唯有如此，C的合理性依據(jù)(logical legitimacy)，即為什么C是最棒的選擇，才能被建立起來。

　　分論點：

　　1. By increasing the access to various means of public transportation, local communities can improve the local environment in a relatively short period of time.

　　通過大量發(fā)展公共交通，很多社區(qū)可以在很短的時間內(nèi)，就極大地改善環(huán)境。

　　--- 進一步發(fā)展： -這一段，可以把重點放在三個方法的時間消耗誰最短上。如果社區(qū) place a premium on increasing the access to various means of public transportation, 這些項目的耗時不會特別長(these projects can be finished within three months to six months). 因此，很快，大量的社區(qū)居民就會感受到公交系統(tǒng)改善的好處( they will see the tangible benefits brought by the betterment of public transportation systems), 從而改變自己的出行方式，減少對于私家車的使用, 環(huán)境的改善也會很快實現(xiàn)。 In sharp contrast, 如果選擇是plant trees，members of these communities need to wait for at least 2 to 3 years before these trees help to greatly improve the air quality. 此外，建設(shè)公園，周期也很長。

　　2. In terms of the contribution to the improvement of local environment, increasing the access to public transportation well dwarfs the other two methods.

　　在具體的改善環(huán)境的效果上來看，發(fā)展公共交通絕對是遠勝于另外兩種方法的。

　　--- 進一步發(fā)展： 這一段里面，可以不妨多用一些假設(shè)型論證�？梢约僭O(shè)，在很多國家，一個社區(qū)，至少有大約1萬名居民，1000輛私家車。目前，因為很多地方的公共交通設(shè)施還不完備，所以每天，這些居民的出行，都在制造著大量的空氣污染和噪音污染。但是，如果改善了之后，可以想象，每周可以減少多少，每個月可以減少多少，每年可以減少多少，數(shù)字非常驚人。與之對比的是，商店停止提供塑料袋，的確是個很好的減少不可生物降解垃圾(non-biodegradable trash)的機會。但是，畢竟，不是所有居民都會隨意地丟棄塑料袋，很多人會選擇反復(fù)使用。 因此，這種方法，對于環(huán)境改善的真正效果存疑( is highly dubious)

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