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　　托福獨(dú)立寫作話題

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the characteristics of successful leaders is their sense of responsibility in accepting their mistakes.

　　托福獨(dú)立寫作參考范文

　　Undoubtedly, successful leaders may have various kinds of characteristics, such as honesty and loyalty. However, some people wonder if the sense of responsibility in accepting their mistakes is the characteristic they possess. I believe that successful leaders’ capability is great enough that they can handle the consequences of their mistakes, especially when considering the power they hold and the knowledge they possess.

　　Firstly, these leaders have great influence on society. This influence can help them resolve the very problem they cause. For example, the leaders in the government passed a policy of printing more currency for our country three years ago. After this policy was enforced, it had a significant impact on our society. Frankly, our society has experienced great inflation and the value of our money has depreciated greatly. One noticeable consequence is that the price of various products has increased largely. When the leaders in the government learned the destructive results of their policy, they took action to resolve the issue. Now the negative impact of this policy is all but extinct. Using this example we can see that leaders have the power to solve their own mistakes.

　　Further, these leaders have the wisdom to solve the errors they commit. Generally, such leaders all have a strong background in academics. Consequently, they are very likely to provide efficient solutions for their mistakes. For example, Andrew, the CEO of Siemens Cooperation, graduated with a Computer science degree from MIT. He designed a new office system for auto-management. In this system, some bugs were not discovered before implementation. Three months ago, he discovered the bugs. Now, he has proposed an efficient solution to eliminate the damage, which may have been inflicted by the bugs. With education in computer science, he was able to resolve the problems completely. Thus, it can be inferred that leaders in business can often find a solution for their problems. Further, it reveals that they can be responsible for their mistakes.

　　Admittedly, the mistakes caused by these leaders initially seem irrevocable. Sometimes, these mistakes might have already imposed tremendous influence on the public. However, leaders can still try their best to protect people from further harms. Only through admitting and correcting their mistakes timely can they maintain their success and win their reputation back.

　　In a nutshell, due to their abilities as leaders and their superior education, I believe that these successful leaders can be responsible for the mistakes they commit.

　　托福獨(dú)立寫作參考譯文

　　毫無疑問，成功的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者可能具備許多品質(zhì)，比如誠(chéng)實(shí)和忠誠(chéng)。然而，有些人懷疑，有責(zé)任接受錯(cuò)誤是否為領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者們具備的品質(zhì)。我認(rèn)為，成功的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者有足夠的能力去處理因自己失誤所造成的后果，尤其是考慮到他們所具有的權(quán)力和所掌握的知識(shí)時(shí)。

　　首先，這些領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者在社會(huì)上有很大的影響力。這種影響力能夠幫助他們解決自己造成的問題。例如，三年前，政府領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者們通過了印刷更多貨幣的政策。這項(xiàng)政策的實(shí)施為我們的社會(huì)帶來了重大的影響。坦率地說，我們的社會(huì)經(jīng)歷了嚴(yán)重的通貨膨脹，貨幣也大大貶值。一個(gè)明顯的后果是，各種產(chǎn)品的價(jià)格大幅上漲。當(dāng)政府領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者認(rèn)識(shí)到他們的政策導(dǎo)致的破壞性后果時(shí)，他們立刻采取行動(dòng)解決這個(gè)問題�，F(xiàn)在，這一政策的負(fù)面影響幾乎完全消除了。通過這一事例，我們可以看出成功的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者完全有解決自己錯(cuò)誤的能力。

　　其次，這些領(lǐng)導(dǎo)有足夠的學(xué)識(shí)來解決他們所犯的錯(cuò)誤。一般來說，這樣的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)有很強(qiáng)的學(xué)術(shù)背景。因此，他們很有可能為自己的錯(cuò)誤提供有效的解決方案。以西門子公司的執(zhí)行總裁 Andrew 為例，他畢業(yè)于麻省理工學(xué)院，獲得了計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)學(xué)位。他設(shè)計(jì)了一款新的自動(dòng)管理辦公系統(tǒng)。在安裝啟用這一系統(tǒng)之前，許多錯(cuò)誤都沒有被發(fā)現(xiàn)。三個(gè)月后，他發(fā)現(xiàn)了錯(cuò)誤所在。現(xiàn)在，他提出了一個(gè)有效的解決方案來減少系統(tǒng)錯(cuò)誤可能帶來的損害。鑒于在計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)方面所受的教育，他能徹底地解決問題。由此可以推斷，商業(yè)領(lǐng)袖通常都能找到處理問題的方案，進(jìn)而說明他們能承擔(dān)錯(cuò)誤。

　　誠(chéng)然，這些領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者造成的錯(cuò)誤最初似乎是不可改變的。有時(shí)，這些錯(cuò)誤可能已經(jīng)對(duì)公眾造成巨大的影響。然而，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者仍然能夠盡最大的努力使人們免受進(jìn)一步的傷害。只有及時(shí)承認(rèn)并糾正自己的錯(cuò)誤，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者才能維持他們的成功，并贏回信譽(yù)。

　　簡(jiǎn)言之，鑒于領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者的能力和他們所接受的優(yōu)秀教育，我認(rèn)為，這些成功的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者能夠?yàn)樗麄兯�犯下的錯(cuò)誤負(fù)責(zé)。

　　托福獨(dú)立寫作范文點(diǎn)撥

　　本文在首段闡明了自己的觀點(diǎn)，即成功的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者有足夠的能力為他們犯下的錯(cuò)誤負(fù)責(zé)。在觀點(diǎn)的論證過程中，筆者從領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者所具備的社會(huì)影響力和解決問題的智慧這兩個(gè)角度進(jìn)行分析，按照本書介紹的論證方式 ( 即分論點(diǎn)、論證、論據(jù) )逐項(xiàng)進(jìn)行。在讓步段中，筆者首先承認(rèn)，這些領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者造成的錯(cuò)誤開始時(shí)似乎是不可逆轉(zhuǎn)的，但領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者肯定會(huì)盡最大的努力使人們免受進(jìn)一步的傷害。在結(jié)尾段，在概括理由的基礎(chǔ)上，筆者對(duì)觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行了總結(jié)。總的來看，文章篇幅雖然較短，但是用詞卻較為“高大上”，推薦在詞匯上力求雕琢、打字速度偏慢的考生研讀和參考。

　　托福獨(dú)立寫作加分單詞和詞組

　　inflation [ɪnˈfleɪʃ(ə)n] n. 通貨膨脹

　　destructive [dɪˈstrʌktɪv] adj. 破壞 ( 性 ) 的;毀滅 ( 性 ) 的

　　auto-management： 自動(dòng)化管理;自動(dòng)管理

　　implementation [ˌɪmplɪmənˈteɪʃ(ə)n] n. 履行;實(shí)施

　　eliminate [ɪˈlɪmɪneɪt] v. 消除;剔除; ( 在競(jìng)賽中 ) 淘汰

　　initially [ɪˈnɪʃ(ə)li] adv. 最初;開始

　　irrevocable [ɪˈrevəkəb(ə)l] adj. 不可改變的;不可****的

　　tremendous [trəˈmendəs] adj. 巨大的;極大的;精彩的

　　in a nutshell： 簡(jiǎn)言之

　　托福獨(dú)立寫作經(jīng)典句型

　　when sb. learned the destructive results of sth., he took action to resolve the issue：

　　當(dāng)某人認(rèn)識(shí)到某事(物)導(dǎo)致的破壞性后果時(shí)，他采取行動(dòng)解決這個(gè)問題