新托福獨(dú)立寫作范文：如何保障城市繁榮

　　As the leader of a city, what would you doto ensure the prosperity and success of the city?

　　A. creating job opportunities for theunemployed;

　　B. lowering food price;

　　C. providing affordable housing

　　5月22日托福獨(dú)立寫作范文( 趙波)

　　題目大意：作為一個(gè)城市的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)想要保障城市的繁榮，要做以下三項(xiàng)：為失業(yè)人員提供就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)，降低食物價(jià)格，提供經(jīng)濟(jì)適用房。波波建議選擇為失業(yè)人員提供工作，證明其重要性，然后另外一段將兩個(gè)選項(xiàng)的不必要性闡述明白。

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　　In a society changing amazingly, that how to gurantee the prosperity and success of a city， the common target of all citizens，has always been brought under the spotlight of the massive media. When talking about which factor plays the most crucial role in ensuring city's smooth development, among creating job vacancy, lowering food price or adjusting housing price, people’s notion varies from one to another. From my perspective, providing job opportunities for the unemployed is the best choice.

　　In the first instance, offering job vacancies to the laid-offs will not only guarantee the social security and safety but also strengthen the purchasing power of the public. For one thing, given the indisputable fact that the unemployed without any income are likely to commit crimes such as theft of wallets or burglaries due to lack of daily necessities, it is self-evident that the greater the number of laid-offs is, the more unstable our society will become. Therefore, after satisfying their basic needs of life with the income from the job offered by the government, they will no longer be a threat to the stability of the whole society, which is the solid foundation for social progress and prosperity. For another, as long as citizens with jobs have more free disposable money and thus possess stronger purchasing monitory power, the various industries will be stimulated and propelled to a large extent. To be specific, with the accruing wealth, an increasing number of people will purchase a private car to commute to their office, with the result that the whole industry of automobiles will experience a booming period. The same logic can also be true of other industries and fields.

　　Furthermore, there are obvious disadvantages of the other two policies, lowering the food price and making the price of house affordable. Despite the fact that keeping the food price low and providing affordable housing will lessen the financial burden of the dwellers in the city in a short term, these two practices would hinder the future success of the whole society. To illustrate, the low price of food will definitely decrease the income of food producers, especially the farmers who support their family by selling what they plant and raise. As a result, they are likely to have great difficulty in making their ends meet, thus ending up becoming homeless or jobless. Also, in a long run, increasing housing affordability will put a damper on the citizens’ passion for creating wealth and thus decrease the dynamics of the whole society. Specifically speaking, when the price is so cheap that nearly everyone can afford it with ease, no one will work hard any more.

　　In a nutshell, I am convinced that the most effective and efficient way to boom a city is to create more job opportunities for the jobless.