托福口語(yǔ)題目：

　　Which class would you join for fun? Art class or science class.Please give your reasons with details.

　　托�？谡Z(yǔ)參考范文：

　　Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me because I'm just the one who has no passion for anything about art. Most of the time, when others are appreciating a great work of art, I will just count when the class will end. Sometimes, I may even have to drink a lot of coffee before the class to prevent myself from falling asleep during the class. By contrast, in the science class, it is so interesting that I hardly feel bored. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid, all of these can spark my interest and I am overwhelmed by tons of the secrets of the cosmos.

　　托�？谡Z(yǔ)參考答案：

　　Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me instead of [than] art class because I am the one who likes doesn’t like/ has no passion for things of art. Inthis way, Most of the time, when the others are appreciating a great aunt art work, I will just count how long will the class end the class will last/ when the class will end. Sometimes, I even may/ may even have to take some measures to prevent myself from falling sleep asleep when/ while my classmates are immersed in a passionate work of music art.

　　However, in the science class, it is so interesting that I can hardly be distracted by the surroundings. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscoverted undiscovered asteroid, all of these got my attention arouse/ spark my interest/ arouse/ spark/ awaken/ pique my curiosity. And I was overwhelmed by tons of secrets of the cosmos.

　　托福口語(yǔ)模板分析：

　　請(qǐng)不要把than和rather than相混淆。形容詞比較級(jí)后邊要接的是than，表示“做比較”，如果是rather than = instead of，意思是“而不是”。故可以說(shuō)：I think A is better than B. 或 I would choose A rather than B. 但是不能串了，I think A is better rather than B.

　　口誤可不行哦!既然觀點(diǎn)是：選the science class，那必然是對(duì)藝術(shù)的事情都不感興趣咯，所以，這里應(yīng)該是一個(gè)口誤(比較嚴(yán)重哦，障礙到了對(duì)方的理解)

　　In this way, 的意思是“依照這種方式，”但是，在這里沒(méi)有什么方式，所以改成了Most of the time，意思是“大多數(shù)時(shí)候，”表明這是一種常態(tài)

　　In this way的正確用法示范：I highly recommend that you should join YEEAOO's 晨讀團(tuán) because in this way, you can not only improve your English, but also make a lot of new friends.

　　PS: 所以你看，這就是為什么can的否定式，必須寫(xiě)成can't或者cannot(連在一起)，因?yàn)榭崭裰�后完全是不一樣的意思�?這里不是can的否定式cannot(不能夠)，而是：can not only(不只是能夠)!!!

　　the others這種說(shuō)法是錯(cuò)誤的，如果是the那就是：the other，表示是2者中的另一個(gè)(one 和 the other);要么就直接others，很多個(gè)里邊的其他幾個(gè)

　　How long后邊是引導(dǎo)的如果是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句的問(wèn)句, 則will需提前

　　但如果how long一道的是整個(gè)句子的賓語(yǔ), 那就用正常語(yǔ)序

　　這里的take some measures to prevent myself from falling asleep:

　　A. take some measures的說(shuō)法不夠具體：請(qǐng)問(wèn)，究竟是采取什么樣的措施呢?建議改為說(shuō)某種具體的措施：比如，課前喝超多咖啡，課前用涼水洗臉，上課的時(shí)候把老師的臉想象成自己的idol等等~

　　B. fall + asleep(形容詞，作表語(yǔ)，表示“睡著了”的狀態(tài))

　　when/ while my classmates are immersed in a passionate work of music art. 為了確保主謂一致，把classmate改成了classmates(后邊是are)同時(shí)，因?yàn)閍rt class實(shí)際上指的是“美術(shù)課”，所以不建議說(shuō)a work of music。PS: work在當(dāng)“作品”講的時(shí)候，是可數(shù)名詞哦~所以，這里加a是正確噠~

　　However, in the science class, it is so interesting that I can hardly be distracted by the surroundings.

　　A. However, 表示“轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系”，但是，這里是表示“對(duì)比關(guān)系”，建議改為“By contrast/ In contrast,”

　　B. 上文說(shuō)的是：美術(shù)課會(huì)讓我覺(jué)得很想睡覺(jué)，很想下課——就是無(wú)聊嘛。那么，下面對(duì)比的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該是說(shuō)：科學(xué)課讓我覺(jué)得不無(wú)聊�？墒莄an hardly be distracted by the surroundings的意思卻是讓我不分心/注意力更集中。建議改為：hardly feel bored

　　【修改后的版本】

　　Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me because I'm just the one who has no passion for anything about art. Most of the time, when others are appreciating a great work of art, I will just count when the class will end. Sometimes, I may even have to drink a lot of coffee before the class to prevent myself from falling asleep during the class.

　　By contrast, in the science class, it is so interesting that I hardly feel bored. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid, all of these can spark my interest and I am overwhelmed by tons of the secrets of the cosmos.