PETS3寫(xiě)作范文

　　Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should:

　　1) describe the drawing briefly,

　　2) explain its intended meaning, and then

　　3) state your point of view.

　　范文：

　　From the picture, we can see that a school sets two different levels of classes and their tuition fee varies greatly between them. The fee for an ordinary class is only 500 yuan while that for a special class amounts to 5000 yuan, which scares students from poor families. We can also perceive that the conditions for the two classes are of discrepancy.

　　Such a phenomenon has begun to emerge in the recent years, that is, schools push forward different teaching programs, leveraging different prices, and the “better classes” bring considerable profit to schools. Yet, the core value of education is equality, and every student has the right to receive the same quality of education. In reality, the number of key schools in China is limited, while all parents want their children to enroll in programs with better teachers and facilities. Thus, it is convenient for schools to categorize students according to tuition fees.

　　Just as the famous educator Confucius said, there is no class discrimination in education. This mentioned classification rather ruins a normal educational system and hinders its development. Therefore, I think it is high time for the related institutions to take measures and create fair educational opportunities for all children.

　　譯文：

　　從這幅圖中我們可以看到一所學(xué)校設(shè)立了不同水平的班級(jí)，其學(xué)費(fèi)也相差甚遠(yuǎn)。一個(gè)普通班的學(xué)費(fèi)僅為500元，而一個(gè)精品班的學(xué)費(fèi)竟達(dá)到了5000元，嚇走了來(lái)自貧窮家庭的學(xué)生們。我們還可以看到兩種班級(jí)的教學(xué)條件也存在巨大的差異。

　　這種現(xiàn)象主要出現(xiàn)在近幾年，即學(xué)校紛紛推出不同價(jià)格的教學(xué)計(jì)劃，那些所謂的精品班給學(xué)校帶來(lái)了豐厚的利潤(rùn)。但是，眾所周知，教育的核心價(jià)值在于平等，每一個(gè)學(xué)生都有接受相同質(zhì)量教育的平等權(quán)利�？墒窃趯�(shí)際生活中，中國(guó)的重點(diǎn)學(xué)校數(shù)量有限，而家長(zhǎng)們卻都希望自己的孩子能夠進(jìn)入那些有著更好的老師和設(shè)施的班級(jí)中。因此，學(xué)校自然而然地就通過(guò)不同的學(xué)費(fèi)來(lái)給學(xué)生分類(lèi)。

　　正如著名的教育家孔子所說(shuō)的，教育是不分階層的。上述的這種分類(lèi)有損于一個(gè)正常的教育系統(tǒng)并影響其發(fā)展。因此，我認(rèn)為現(xiàn)在是時(shí)候通過(guò)有關(guān)部門(mén)采取措施、為所有的孩子們創(chuàng)造平等的接受教育的機(jī)會(huì)。

　　閃光詞匯及詞組：

　　vary: v. 改變，變化，變更

　　amount to: 達(dá)到

　　scare: v. 驚嚇，受驚

　　perceive: v. 感知，感到，認(rèn)識(shí)到

　　push forwards: 推出

　　as is know to all: 眾所周知

　　core: n. 核心

　　key school: 重點(diǎn)學(xué)校

　　enroll: v. 登記，招收，加入

　　categorize: v. 分類(lèi)，加以類(lèi)別

　　Confucius: n. 孔子

　　classification: n. 分類(lèi)，分級(jí)

　　institution: n. 機(jī)構(gòu)

　　萬(wàn)能句型：

　　From the picture, we can see that…

　　We can also perceive that

　　Such a phenomenon has begun to emerge in the recent years, that is…

　　Therefore, I think it is high time for the related institutes to take measures…