2018年P(guān)ETS三級寫作范文（10）

　　試題

　　Directions: Read the text below. Write an essay in about 120 words, in which you should summarize the key points of the text and make comments on them. Try to use you own words.

　　A 23-year-old Chinese woman has died after her mobile phone exploded while it was being charged.

　　Miss Zhao was found dead in Shijiazhuang, the capital city of northeast China' s Hebei province. She was talking to her boyfriend on her mobile phone, but suddenly went silent.

　　After the boyfriend failed to get a response in a prolonged period of time, he rushed to Zhao' s home. It was already too late, as the phone had clearly exploded in her hands, and her entire chest had been burned.

　　This piece of news draws public attention to the using safety of electronic devices, especially the most commonly used mobile phone, and provides information that will be of great value in as sessing the safety of cell phone use.

　　Liang Guangchuan, a researcher from Hebei University of Technology, says the tragedy could be caused by a faulty charger and electric leakage of the lithium battery. He suggests that to be on the safe side, one should avoid using his or her mobile phone while it is being charged.

　　This accident caused great response in the population of cell phone users. A cell phone user replied in an interview, "I swear, after I post this comment, I will never play with my mobile phone again when the battery is still being charged. " A sample of comments on Weibo: "Should the cell phone producer be responsible for this accident and make effort to broadcast the knowledge of cell phone using safety?"

　　范文

　　Recently, a tragedy happened in Hebei, China. A very young girl died because of cell phone explosion. Her cell phone exploded when she was talking to her boyfriend at night via cell phone , which is being charged.

　　This sad news caused public discussion all over country. Experts and researchers claimed that cell phone users should avoid of using cell phone when charging them in case of security issues.

　　Those people who frequently use cell phones are concerned about the safety of cell phone using. Most users are frightened by this news and promised that they would never use cell phones when it was being charged. Yet, someone intended to question the liability of the phone producers and want to get safety assurance from them.

　　In my opinion, as many cautionary tales as I have heard, I will try to get rid of the cell phone addiction and find other things to do when it is being charged.

　　試題

　　You are the organizer of an English speech contest, and you want to invite a foreign teacher in your school to be a judge. Write an email to him,

　　1) telling him about the contest (time, location, topic, etc.);

　　2) expressing your hope for his participation and his reply to your message.

　　You should write approximately 100 words. Do not use your own name at the end of your email. Use "Wang Lin" instead.

　　【高分范文】

　　Dear Mr. Smith,

　　I am the organizer of an English speech contest. Recently, an English speech contest on the topic of "Should college students work at part time?" will be held in the auditorium(Room 101) at 2 p.m. on Wednesday after- noon ( April 6). We know that you are a popular teacher among students. If it is convenient for you, we would like to invite you to be the judge of this contest. Please let us know as soon as possible if you can come. I am loo- king forward to your further reply. Best wishes for you.

　　Yours Sincerely,

　　Wang Lin

　　【寫作點金】

　　此篇屬應(yīng)用文文體，是一封邀請函。首先應(yīng)該注意邀請函的格式。其次要注意正文部分的寫作層次：文章的開頭就要說明寫信人邀請的內(nèi)容以及具體時間、地點，語言要誠懇，盡量使用簡短的句式把意思表達清楚。最后寫明希望被邀請者能接受，并表明希望盡早得到回復(fù)。

　　【高頻詞句】

　　on the topic of… 關(guān)于…主題

　　be held 舉行

　　be convenient for sb. 對某人來說是方便的

　　invite sb. to d0 sth. 邀請某人做某事

　　I aln looking forward to your further reply. 期待您的進一步回復(fù)