公共英語三級寫作指導(dǎo)：常犯錯誤

　　一.評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：語言第一位;結(jié)構(gòu)第二位;內(nèi)容第三位;

　　二.滔滔不絕意識流：

　　1) 自由分段不可取;(compact)

　　2) 語言雜亂不可取;(concise)

　　3) 一段文章不可取;(concrete)

　　三.無話可說真難受：

　　1) 立論法: 廣告效應(yīng)，(P114)電腦時代，技術(shù)改變生活， 大學(xué)學(xué)費上漲，學(xué)習(xí)和成功的關(guān)系，(P154: 朋友和家庭，電視上癮, 劣質(zhì)產(chǎn)品, 城鄉(xiāng)差距), 環(huán)境保護(hù)的重要性

　　駁論法:是否應(yīng)該購買外國貨,是否應(yīng)該禁放煙花爆竹

　　四.思維跳躍斷層多：

　　啟：first, at present, first of all, above all, at the first place, on the one hand, for one thing, to begin with, 為第一觀點。

　　承：second, on the other hand, in addition, additionally, moreover, what is more, furthermore, third, last but not least,為第二觀點

　　轉(zhuǎn): But, however, nevertheless, on the contrary, unlike, otherwise, conversely, unfortunately, whereas, unfortunately, surprisingly, ironically

　　合：Accordingly, therefore, as a result, consequently, in conclusion, to sum up, in general, on the whole, by and large, in brief, briefly speaking

　　因果：due to/ owing to/thanks to/as a result of + 名詞

　　___ in order to + 動詞

　　Along with/Coupled with + 名詞

　　As/since/because+句子

　　Coupled with A is B that contributes to (is responsible for) C

　　引用：As the saying goes, as somebody put it,

　　句型首尾：Given all the above factors, it is safe to reach the conclusion that

　　Taking into account all the above factors, it is reasonable to reach the conclusion

　　五、低級錯誤常出現(xiàn):

　　三一致：主謂一致;時態(tài)一致;人稱一致;兩不能：不能串句，不能斷句