2018年10月11日雅思寫作考試回憶及解析
The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the UK from 1997 to 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
TASK 1
題目分析:
題型:動態(tài)線圖
作文主題:英國常用的電器
寫作要點:本題寫作一定要注意到動態(tài)圖的特征,其次,本題內容不是非常復雜,語法詞匯的考察就體現(xiàn)在替換方面,這是考生們需要重視的;內容回應方面每一項的趨勢描寫是必須的,并添加適當的形容詞、副詞進行修飾,使用不同詞性的表達方式進行句型替換(例如increase作名詞、動詞的不通句型用法);動態(tài)圖還需注意到特征數據(起點、頂峰等)的篩選比較描述,折線圖體現(xiàn)的很清楚,不會出現(xiàn)太大難點。語法方面時態(tài)也是考察重點,本題可用到一般過去時、過去完成時等時態(tài)。在內容方面,要注意到數據的添加,線圖可以先標注一下每一項的數據,以免出現(xiàn)遺漏。
TASK 2
Some groups, such as poor people and people from rural areas, think universities should make it especially easy for them to get access to university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
題目分析:
題目類型:教育類
提問方式:同意與否類
Higher education, as a symbol of a country's competitiveness in the globalization associated with the development of the society, namely entering the university has become a basic requirement for both the citizens and the community-especially such demand among the poor or rural areas is increasing. Indeed, it is necessary to take this into consideration to benefit our future development.
When talking about the spread of compulsory education, there is a consensus that everyone has the rights to participate in that, but the higher education has always been a dilemma for improving the general educational level for a country, while if people from poverty or rural areas had the chance to go to college, it would have been the best way to promote the equality of education, from which, as a win-win situation for both the individuals and the society, almost all the industries, like technology and economy, can be backed up with more talents who are potential and creative. Besides, the advanced technology used in education can also provide an easier way for this group to access to various courses around the world.
Unfortunately, to make the enrollment easily cannot guarantee the high quality of university students, due to the relatively worse academic performance of the poor whose basic education resources are deficient. It is undeniable that the education in poor or rural areas lacks the ability to compete with the metropolitans; thus, to help such students, that the universities lower the standards could lose the nature and specialty of their education. However, without the chance for the group, they would never have motivation to change their mobility of social status, which also exert negative influence on the country.
In conclusion, although there are some limitations and difficulties, the policy of giving more opportunities and decreasing the requests to a reasonable level for poor people can be worth launching for a country.
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