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2017年11月11日雅思寫作范文解析
小作文
類型	柱圖
題目	The charts below show the protein and calorie intakes of people in different parts of the world. Compare and contrast.
范文解析	本題屬于柱圖組合類別。考生在處理信息時(shí)務(wù)必做到區(qū)分重點(diǎn)和次重點(diǎn)以免數(shù)值論述過多,造成模糊數(shù)據(jù)特征。此外，在段落劃分方面，組合圖形基本可以遵循 “一圖一段” 的方法。（此處不考慮特殊情況）
高分表達(dá)（范文中已用紅色標(biāo)注）	It is noticeable that…	明顯的是…
	be almost double that of…	幾乎是…的兩倍
	be approximately at half of…	幾乎是…的一半
	share the same amount of	有同樣的量
	regarding to…	至于…
	stand at…	到達(dá)…
	close to…	接近…
	Overall, it can be seen that	總的來說，可以看出…
范文	The bar charts compare the average amount of protein and calorie intake by people from four regions of the world. It is noticeable that people in North America take most protein into their bodies, with 62 grams of animal protein and 18 grams of other protein and the overall quantity is almost double that of protein intake by Latin American (45grams). Meanwhile, their animal protein intake is approximately at half of that by North American. However, the intake of protein in India and East Africa is much less, at around 30 grams among which they share the same amount of other protein intake ( 15grams). Regarding to average intake of calories, the figure for North America is over the ideal calorie intake, standing at 3500 kilocalories and for Latin America is 2800 kilocalories, close to ideal intake ( 3000 kilocalories). By contrast, there are only 2000 kilocalories intake for people in India. Overall, it can be seen that average intake of protein and calories of North American both exceed the ideal standards whereas that for Indian are the lowest among those areas.
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大作文
類型	社會(huì)類
題目	Online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
范文解析	本文屬于社會(huì)生活類話題。討論關(guān)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物取代實(shí)體購物的利弊。考生在思考論點(diǎn)時(shí)應(yīng)該不會(huì)存在困難，畢竟網(wǎng)購已經(jīng)成為了現(xiàn)代生活的一部分。但是在處理好處或者壞處的論點(diǎn)時(shí)最好能夠梳理出一個(gè)清晰的層次，例如商家或者買家角度。這樣主體段的思路和論述能更加有條理。
文章結(jié)構(gòu)	paragraph 1 :結(jié)合時(shí)代背景引入話題且表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。 paragraph 2: 論述網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。（分為買家和賣家兩個(gè)層面） paragraph 3: 論述網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的缺點(diǎn)。（分為買家和實(shí)體商家兩個(gè)層面） paragraph 4: 總結(jié)上文論點(diǎn)，強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的觀點(diǎn)以及如何避免缺點(diǎn)。
高分話題表達(dá)（范文中已用紅色標(biāo)注）	physical shops		實(shí)體常見
	vendors		供應(yīng)商
	diminish		減少
	be free of charge		免費(fèi)
	utility bills		物業(yè)賬單
	launch new products		發(fā)布新產(chǎn)品
	find bargains		淘便宜貨
	shopping pattern		購物模式
	To commence with, …		首先, …
	irrational or excessive consumption		不理智的過度的消費(fèi)
	resist the temptation		抵御誘惑
	something failing to meet their real demands		沒有滿足他們要求的東西
	bankrupt		破產(chǎn)
	consequent		隨之發(fā)生的
	aggravate the burden on…		加劇…的負(fù)擔(dān)
	the boom of online transaction		在線交易的繁榮
	unstoppable and irreversible		無法停止的和不可逆轉(zhuǎn)的
	boost the prosperity of national economy		促進(jìn)國家經(jīng)濟(jì)的繁榮
	In an attempt to…		嘗試…
	unnecessary consumption		不必要的消費(fèi)
高分結(jié)構(gòu)（范文中已用藍(lán)色標(biāo)注）	With the advent of…, …h(huán)as been dramatically changed.		隨著…的產(chǎn)生, …得到了很大的改變
	…can benefit from this tendency, though several drawbacks cannot be underestimated.		盡管有一些無法輕視的缺點(diǎn)，…仍可以從中受益。
	The most advantageous is that…		最大的優(yōu)勢是…
	Conversely, there also exist some defects about…		相反地，關(guān)于…仍然有一些缺點(diǎn)。
范文	With the advent of internet, people’s way of shopping has been dramatically changed. Online shopping is thriving and taking the place of shopping in physical shops. Undeniably, both consumers and sellers can benefit from this tendency though several drawbacks can not be underestimated. From the perspective of vendors, the budget for running business is diminished considerably for the reason that the rent for a shop online is quite cheaper and some are even free of charge; besides, there is no need for them to pay for utility bills. The most advantageous is that their commodities can be introduced to a wider range of people. As long as sellers launch new products, consumers no matter at home or abroad are able to search it by searching engines within seconds. In this case, they are likely to gain huge profits from the high sales of goods. As for buyers, it is achievable to purchase whatever they need without going out. Unlike the past, the only thing they need do is to pick out items and click the button for payment. Furthermore, they may easily compare the price and features of products, as well as find bargains, buying the ideal goods with less cost. Conversely, there also exist some defects about this shopping pattern. To commence with, it may lead to irrational or excessive consumption. Shopping can be done anywhere at daytime or night, with diverse commodities available from the whole world. Under such circumstance, it is hard for consumers to resist the temptation and easier to buy something failing to meet their real demands. What’s worse, owners of physical stores are facing bankrupt. Statistics show that there were 22 shopping centers closed in Shanghai in the first half year of 2016. The consequent unemployment aggravates the burden on government. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned the boom of online transaction is unstoppable and irreversible and it boosts the prosperity of national economy. In an attempt to avoid unnecessary consumption, shoppers had better think twice before making decisions of purchase.
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