題目為：Employers should not be concerned about the way their employees are dressed at work. They should only care about the quality of their work. 話不多說(shuō)，范文自�。�

　　雅思寫作真題范文

　　We now live in a time when people are perhaps more image conscious than ever before due to social media and the influence of airbrushing in everyday life and in the workplace . Therefore, it appears to me that never should employers merely focus on the quality of work, although it is necessary.

　　Only focusing on the quality of work could indeed boost productivity. For employers, the more productive their employees are, the more profit they will make. In this case, empowering and encouraging employees to improve the quality of work contributes to the greater efficiency and increased income of the company and employers as well. But this also unfortunately takes a heavy toll on the company profitability. For example, when employees wearing casually not formally attend a formal meeting, this will impress colleagues or collaborative partners as a worker who does not show enough respect, thus possibly leading to an unnecessary failure in cooperation.

　　However, if employers prioritize the output of employees rather than personal, professional appearance, this will also inflict a poor image both on the company and on its employees, especially in service industry. This is mainly because first impressions are crucial in these industries. Wearing a uniform or formal attire not just shows respect for customers and clients, but reveals a high-quality, professional service or products, an effective tactic to gain a positive image as well as customer loyalty. Without it, the image of a company will gradually become worse and meanwhile productivity and profitability will thus decrease as well.

　　Such unreasonable work style may also pose threats to the shape of employees’ image. Being committed to the quality of work, some employees, workaholics in particular, will spend too much time improving their work performance and then pay less attention to what they should eat, how much they need to exercise and what kind of clothes they had better wear. If this lasts too long, they will suffer a poor self-image and become less confident, particularly in the world where every single individual emphasizes appearance.

　　In conclusion, irreplaceable as the quality of work is, it is not only driving factor for the development of a company and what employees wear and look in the workplace does matter for customers, employers and themselves.(340 words)范文來(lái)自邢睿嬴老師。

　　3.雅思寫作之文章結(jié)構(gòu)

　　P1：引入話題+表明觀點(diǎn)(不同意)

　　P2：承認(rèn)只注重工作質(zhì)量的優(yōu)勢(shì)：會(huì)給公司帶來(lái)更多的利潤(rùn)。

　　P3：指出只注重工作質(zhì)量的弊端：會(huì)使得公司形象受損。

　　P4：指出只注重工作質(zhì)量的弊端：會(huì)對(duì)職員的個(gè)人形象造成負(fù)面影響。

　　P5:總結(jié)：重申觀點(diǎn)

　　4.雅思寫作之高分話題表達(dá)

　　Image conscious 注重個(gè)人形象的

　　Airbrushing 修圖

　　Empower ...to do sth 使能夠(enable的同義詞)

　　Impress 留下...的印象

　　Unnecessary 不必要的

　　Inflict 使遭受(suffer)

　　Formal attire 正裝

　　Tactic 策略

　　Customer loyalty 顧客忠誠(chéng)度

　　Self-image 自我形象

　　irreplaceable 不可取代的

　　高分結(jié)構(gòu) the more productive their employees are, the more profit they will make. the more... the more...結(jié)構(gòu)

　　take a heavy toll on . 對(duì)...有負(fù)面影響

　　...,thus possibly leading to an unnecessary failure in cooperation.

　　非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)做結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)

　　not just shows respect for customers and clients, but reveals Not just...but (also)的動(dòng)詞平行

　　To what they should eat, how much they need to exercise and what kind of clothes they had better wear. 三個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句的平行

　　irreplaceable as the quality of work is 讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的倒裝