雅思寫作題目：

　　“when people succeed,it is because of hard work.Luck has noting to do with success.”Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above?Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

　　雅思寫作范文：

　　It is universally acknowledged that hard work is indispensable to success.Scientists toil for years before they make a major discovery.Students study for years before they accepted by a top university.However,less known is the role luck plays in achieving one’s goals.It is often luck that turns years of hard work into success:people discover and invent things with the help of luck,and so do they become famous and find jobs.

　　雅思寫作范文分析：

　　首段引出觀點，運氣促使努力轉化為成功，強調luck的作用，在首段中，簡單一句給出scientists,students的例子�？梢詤⒖嫉牟糠钟性~匯，indispensable，toil;句型有倒裝句：less known is... ,強調句：It is often luck that...

　　首段還有一點特別之處在于，觀點中呈現(xiàn)的內容正好是對于后面三個分論點的簡述，學生可以模仿這種前后呼應的完整結構。

　　People discover and invent things with the help of luck,and so do they become famous and find jobs.

　　First,luck has help a great number of people invent and discover things,Sir Alexander Fleming experimented with antibacterial substances for nine years before he discovered penicillin.He went through laborious trials and error,but it was on account of luck he looked at the mold on a piece of cheese and got the idea for penicillin there and then.Benjamin Franklin has been trying to prove his idea that lighting and electricity is the same thing,but it was only in flying a kite that he proved that and the concept of a lighting rod happened to strike him.

　　雅思寫作范文分析：

　　在雅思寫作中將論點展開的充分論據(jù)是必要的，這一點范文中有體現(xiàn)，利用Sir Alexander Fleming，Benjamin Franklin的例子展開了論點“運氣能夠幫助人們發(fā)明創(chuàng)造”。這些例子都是比較熟悉的，但是學生要反思自己能不能表述出來，尤其是對于人物姓名的拼寫也要注意。

　　Also,luck helps people become famous.Lets consider young authors.Many work hard to learn to white.For example,they take writing classes.Besides,they work at menial jobs so as to survive and gain experience.Then one day a lucky writer may have a piece of writing published and attract public attention.Or the writer meets an editor at the right time and place.Years of continuous writing brings the writer to doors of success,but one lucky chance,like the shot in soccer,eventually helps his or her reap success.

　　雅思寫作范文分析：

　　本段短句較多，但結構和意思比較緊湊。可以參考最后一句的寫法，其中bring...to doors of success,like the shot in soccer(插入語)，reap success等可以用在相似話題中。

　　Finally,luck has helped many people secure jobs.One may spend much time writing and sending resumes,reading recruiting ads,going to job interviews.One may pound the pavement for a long time before getting a job.However,it is with luck that a job hunter meets the person who will offer a position to him or her,or learns of a vacancy that is not advertised.Being at the right place at the right time often helps one land a job,and this has to do with luck.

　　雅思寫作范文分析：

　　可以參考的有動詞詞組類似排比的寫法：writing and sending resumes,reading recruiting ads,going to job interviews.

　　One can hardly succeed without hard work,but hard work without luck often leads to nothing.Luck has helped a great number of people find success.In fact,luck goes hand in hand with hard work.