范文題目：

　　It is more important to choose to study a subject that interests you than a subject preparing you better for a job or career. Do you agree or disagree?

　　題目有關(guān)教育中的”課程選擇“并聯(lián)系職業(yè)規(guī)劃。需要學(xué)生從”選擇適合學(xué)生職業(yè)發(fā)展的課程“或是”選擇自己感興趣的課程“中做出選擇。

　　范文相關(guān)分析：

　　Education is one of the key words of our time, however, people's views differ greatly as to which should be the superior option of academic pursuit, to opt for courses conducing to future career or to focus on subjects that interest them. As I see it, compared with choosing subjects that can help young adults ready themselves for career challenges, to deliberately specialize in one's favorite courses is more commendable.

　　首段的結(jié)構(gòu)：

　　背景-爭(zhēng)議主題介紹(1句復(fù)雜句)+觀點(diǎn)(選擇感興趣的)

　　由于運(yùn)用了一句復(fù)雜句，首段內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰，也在首段就體現(xiàn)了寫作者的水平。復(fù)雜句用”people's views differ as to... to do...“這種形式替代“people's views are different about...，some people...，the other people...”這種需要用多個(gè)句子，也比較模板化的形式。學(xué)生可以參考使用。其中也不乏一些比較好的詞匯，如academic pursuit學(xué)術(shù)追求，career challenges職業(yè)的挑戰(zhàn)，deliberately謹(jǐn)慎地，specialize專門從事 ，commendable很好的

　　Opting for the courses in which one takes considerable interest will enjoy more visible merits. First, one's study motivation can be highly stimulated provided that one can choose subjects exerting a peculiar fascination on him or her. Conversely, people might generate career burnout even if they might get profit-making jobs.

　　本段給出第一個(gè)論點(diǎn)，學(xué)習(xí)感興趣的課程的好處-激發(fā)學(xué)習(xí)動(dòng)機(jī)，用兩句話從正反兩個(gè)角度-激發(fā)學(xué)習(xí)動(dòng)機(jī)vs職業(yè) 倦怠-來(lái)論證。好的詞匯，比如considerable相當(dāng)大的，merit優(yōu)點(diǎn) ， study motivation學(xué)習(xí)動(dòng)機(jī)，stimulate刺激， provided that條件是，exert 施以影響，peculiar fascination特殊的魅力 ，career burnout職業(yè)倦怠，profit-making jobs高薪職業(yè).

　　Also, taking one's favorite subjects can fully tap his or her infinite potentials. Meanwhile, one can fully enjoy the process of learning and career life. Apart from that, it is also a sort of success if one can perfectly combine specialized knowledge with career ambition. Therefore, college students have sound reasons to select the courses that interest them.

　　本段給出其他論點(diǎn)，學(xué)習(xí)感興趣的課程的好處-挖掘無(wú)限潛力、享受學(xué)習(xí)和職業(yè)、將興趣和職業(yè)更好地結(jié)合。可參考用詞有 tap his or her infinite potentials，career ambition.

　　Indeed, I have to concede that the acquisition of pragmatic courses might still have some benefits. Sure enough, job-related courses will help one outshine many candidates and successfully secure a decent job. That is why some people feel that education is a kind of investment and competitive courses such as engineering, science and technology can, in most cases, earn high interests. Thereby, what some people are concerned about is whether the course of their choice can lead to a profitable career. After all, career-related subjects can lay a solid foundation for climbing the career ladder.

　　讓步段，實(shí)用性的課程也是有好處的，幫助提升就業(yè)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力。本段有很多好的表達(dá)方式，比如acquisition of pragmatic courses，Sure enough,help one outshine many candidates，secure a decent job，profitable career，climb the career ladder在職業(yè)上平步青云.

　　In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that even though choosing utilitarian subjects is never without merit, university students should still be encouraged to choose their favorite areas of study.

　　尾端重申觀點(diǎn)：

　　應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生選擇感興趣的課程。

　　總結(jié)：可以看到，寫作者的英語(yǔ)功底很高，在很多表達(dá)方式上都沒有“落入俗套”，在范文中沒有出現(xiàn)某個(gè)概念是利用同一種方式重復(fù)表達(dá)的。很多詞匯都可以加入同學(xué)們的“素材庫(kù)”了。但是有一點(diǎn)，如果在內(nèi)容中加入一些更具體的例子會(huì)更好一些。