題目：年輕人要盡快脫離父母獨(dú)自居住還是跟父母居住的時(shí)間更長?

　　作者主要觀點(diǎn)：年輕人要盡量與父母居住更長的時(shí)間。

　　(首先表達(dá)出現(xiàn)象)Most young adults prefer to have a separate or independent life from their parents or families as soon as possible. (原因)This is because they have a strong urge for freedom in doing what they desire. (轉(zhuǎn)折)But in fact many of them fail. (為什么會(huì)失敗呢?)(解釋) This should not be surprising since often they are actually not ready mentally although they are physically ready. (補(bǔ)充說明)It is widely understood that to live independently requires a lot of energy and is not easy at all. (為什么不容易呢?)(例子支撐)In this twenty first century, people may need more and more preparation because competition is increasing rapidly. (激烈的競爭是怎么樣的)(現(xiàn)象)An observation shows that many University graduated students are unemployed. (所以)Therefore, they will not be able to support and fulfill their necessities.