2017年雅思寫作范文：廢料的循環(huán)利用

　　In many countries, there is no enough recycling of waste materials (eg. paper, glass, cans).What are the reasons and how to solve it ? 很多國(guó)家，廢料的循環(huán)利用不盡如人意，原因何在，如何解決?

　　【頭腦風(fēng)暴】

　　廢料處置以及再循環(huán)利用，比較日本和中國(guó)，日本做的更好：分類處理生活垃圾，人們有環(huán)保意識(shí)，節(jié)能意識(shí)，廢料對(duì)于環(huán)境的污染很少，廢料得到充分的循環(huán)利用。相反，中國(guó)做得不盡如人意。有些人缺乏環(huán)保意識(shí)，媒體的宣傳力度不足，政府對(duì)于亂丟生活的垃圾的現(xiàn)象也沒有明確的規(guī)范。同時(shí)，廢料處理基地和廢料處理技術(shù)也有待改善。

　　【范文賞析】

　　{首段}：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 寫作目的

　　Recycling the waste and developing regenerated materials is a link that is essential for the national economic construction. Alarmingly, it is not rare to see that litterbugs almost appear in every corner of individual city. Even worse, the failure to properly recycling wastes will pose a threat to the sustainable development of natural resources. This essay aims to ascertain the reasons and solutions.

　　【解析】

　　1. Recycling the waste and developing regenerated materials is a link that is essential for the national economic construction.收舊利廢，發(fā)展再生資源是國(guó)民經(jīng)濟(jì)建設(shè)中一個(gè)不可缺少的環(huán)節(jié)。

　　2. Alarmingly, it is not rare to see that litterbugs almost appear in every corner of individual city. 令人擔(dān)憂的是，每個(gè)城市的每個(gè)地區(qū)幾乎都有亂扔垃圾的人。

　　3. The failure to properly recycling wastes will pose a threat to the sustainable development of natural resources. 不能有效地循環(huán)垃圾會(huì)對(duì)于自然資源的可發(fā)展造成嚴(yán)重的威脅。

　　【亮點(diǎn)】

　　1. is essential for 對(duì)于……是重要的

　　2. it is not rare to see that …… 很常見的是……

　　3. pose a threat to …… 對(duì)……造成威脅

　　{二段}：人們?yōu)楹挝茨軓U料循環(huán)利用

　　Indeed, what some people are doing is wasting precious natural resources and disposing of garbage randomly. The reasons why recycling waste materials leaves much to be desired are not far to seek. First, some cities fail to establish enough recycling sites to collect and tackle waste materials. Meanwhile, some countries lack efficient techniques in terms of waste treatment. Another major reason is that some people have little knowledge about how to deal with life waste or they simply lack eco-friendly consciousness.

　　【解析】

　　1. Some cities fail to establish enough recycling sites to collect and arrange waste materials. 一些城市未能夠建立足夠的回收站去收集和處理廢料。

　　2. Some people have little knowledge about how to deal with life waste or they simply lack eco-friendly consciousness. 人們?nèi)狈υ鯓犹幚砩�活垃圾的知識(shí)或者他們僅僅是缺乏一種環(huán)保的意識(shí)。

　　【亮點(diǎn)】

　　1. …… leave much to be desired ……遠(yuǎn)非令人滿意

　　2. in terms of 在……方面，就……而言

　　{三段}：如果有效地展開廢料循環(huán)利用

　　Considering the severity of this issue, some effective measures should be adopted. First，relevant departments of an urban government are expected to make an overall plan and rational arrangement for establishing a collecting and purchasing network to promote the recycling of waste materials. Likewise，attempts should be made to by scientist to explore and popularize efficient and eco-friendly techniques of recycling wastes. Further, strengthening the publicity to raise the consciousness of cherishing the natural resources also works.Eventually, the responsibility should be given to every individual. The public should be urged to use recycled products, install energy-efficient and water-saving appliances, separate solid wastes.

　　【解析】

　　1. Attempts should be made by scientists to explore and popularize efficient and eco-friendly techniques of recycling wastes. 科學(xué)家們應(yīng)該努力去研發(fā)和普及高效環(huán)保的廢料循環(huán)技術(shù)。

　　2. The public should be urged to use recycled products, install energy-efficient and water-saving appliances, carry out separate collection of wastes. 我們應(yīng)該督促民眾去使用再生物品，安裝節(jié)水、節(jié)能設(shè)備，實(shí)行垃圾分類收集。

　　【亮點(diǎn)】

　　1. attempts should be made to do sth 我們應(yīng)該努力做……

　　2. …… also works ……同樣是起作用的

　　{尾段}：亮明觀點(diǎn) + 總結(jié)理由

　　Overall, it is no easy task to effectively handle and recycle wastes. Only when concerted endeavors are made by the government, the scientists，the mass media and every individual can this thorny social issue be resolved perfectly.

　　【名師語料庫(kù)】

　　1. Some city-dwellers lack the awareness of recycling wastes effectively. 一些城市居民，缺乏有效地循環(huán)廢料的意識(shí)。

　　2. The government should be urged to impose tougher penalties on environmentally damaging behaviors. 政府應(yīng)該給督促去處罰破壞環(huán)境的行為。

　　3. The public should be educated to foster the awareness of valuing the natural resource 人們應(yīng)該被教育去培養(yǎng)珍惜自然資源的意識(shí)。

　　4. Proper measures should be timely adopted to turn those litterbugs into environmentally conscious people. 應(yīng)該采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧�將那些亂扔垃圾的人變成自覺的環(huán)境保護(hù)者。

　　5. The public should be educated to raise their awareness of environmental protection. 我們應(yīng)該教育人們提高他們的環(huán)保意識(shí)。

　　【分析問題解決問題話題句型拓展】

　　1. it is an universal phenomenon that …… 是一個(gè)很普遍的現(xiàn)象

　　2. it is no easy task to do sth，however，something must be done. 做……不是容易的事情, 但是，我們必須要采取一些措施。

　　3. efforts should be made by sb to do sth v某人努力去做……

　　4. it is imperative for the government to do sth v政府做……是勢(shì)在必行的

　　5. it is unshakable obligation of every individual to do sth v去做……人人有責(zé)

　　6. the reasons why …… are manifold ……的原因是多樣的

　　7. first，……　can be owed to do sth 首先，……的原因可被給歸結(jié)為……

　　8. another reason to be considered is that …… 另一個(gè)人原因是……

　　9. last, …… is the root cause of …… 最后，…… 是……的根源

　　10. concerted efforts should be made by ……，……，…… to do sth ……，……，和…… 應(yīng)該共同努力去做……