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2017雅思寫作范文:人們是否變的更獨(dú)立

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2017雅思寫作范文:人們是否變的更獨(dú)立

  Task:Some people think that in the modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other,while others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  思路解析:

  更獨(dú)立的原因1:互聯(lián)網(wǎng)降低了人們交流的頻率。舉例,人們習(xí)慣于依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)來獲取新聞,知識(shí),經(jīng)驗(yàn)和答案,而不是面對面的和其他人的詢問,討論和談話。

  更獨(dú)立的原因2:機(jī)器自動(dòng)化讓人們不再依賴彼此。舉例,ATM可以讓人們自己取錢,而不是去銀行柜臺(tái)對柜員提出要求。

  更依賴的原因1 : 在一個(gè)后工業(yè)時(shí)代,每一個(gè)社會(huì)個(gè)體都被教育和訓(xùn)練在某一個(gè)領(lǐng)域精通,這意味著他們的工作必須依賴其他同事和行業(yè)的合作; 他們的生活必須依賴來自他人提供的產(chǎn)品和服務(wù)。

  參考范文:

  Should the level of interdependence between people of today be up or down? This question has been a heated social issue in debate, and resulted in opposite views among the public. Personally, I believe current human is more independent than before, and my reasons will be explored as below.

  In terms of information communication, the thriving Internet today has reduced the level of people’s connection with others, because this technology can provide more abundant, timely and objective information to every social individual. In other words, modern people are used to relying on the Internet for the acquirement of news, knowledge, social experience and even answers of school tasks, rather than face-to-face questioning, talking or discussing with others. Therefore, the common interdependent human relationships, such as the ones between students and teachers, between children and parents, between the youth and elders, are fading.

  Machinery automation has also contributed much to the independence of people, because this technology makes people self-sufficient. For example, by using artificial intelligent devices like Auto Teller Machine, Vending Machine, microwave ovens, sweeping robots and face recognition access control system, people can deal with day-to-day transactions and household chores, or obtain common goods and services by themselves, with no more reliance on service personals, such as clerks in shops, tellers in bank counters, chefs in restaurants, or doormen in the gateway.

  However, the main reason why people become more dependent is about the specialization in the post-industry age. Today, every social individual has been educated and trained to be expert at only one certain field. That is to way, a contemporary employee needs the technological communication and cooperation with co-workers in other departments or with another companies in different subjects, for the purpose of accomplishing the whole working project. Similarly, daily-life running and management are far beyond the limitation of any individual’s abilities. In other words, all people have to seriously depend on others who provide food, news, transportation, entertainment and maintenance of facilities.

  In conclusion, I strongly believe the increasing independence of people is dramatic and should not be ignored. Although we are becoming specialized in narrow directions of careers, we have more independence and self-sufficiency, by the support of the Internet and automatic technologies.

  (372 words)

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