2018年5月19日雅思大作文預(yù)測(cè)：家庭和外界對(duì)孩子造成的影響

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　　家庭和外界對(duì)孩子造成的影響 A family has a great influence on children's development, but the outside of home plays a bigger part in children's ...

　　家庭和外界對(duì)孩子造成的影響 A family has a great influence on children's development, but the outside of home plays a bigger part in children's life. Do you agree or disagree?

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　　1. 首先，家庭造成的影響不可小覷。畢竟父母是孩子生命當(dāng)中的第一個(gè)老師，每天陪伴孩子們最長(zhǎng)時(shí)間。舉例，他們直接教會(huì)孩子們基本的生存技能，如語(yǔ)言，做飯，收拾屋子，衛(wèi)生習(xí)慣，以及基本的學(xué)術(shù)能力，如數(shù)學(xué)計(jì)算，閱讀，思考和判斷。 2. 然而，其他因素同樣有影響力。舉例，在孩子們的學(xué)術(shù)教育上，學(xué)校的老師影響是第一位的。他們是學(xué)生教育的領(lǐng)路人，教會(huì)他們各個(gè)學(xué)科的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，學(xué)習(xí)方式，以及培養(yǎng)他們對(duì)于某些學(xué)科的熱愛(ài)。 3. 媒體同樣對(duì)孩子們的影響很大。舉例，電視和電影鏡頭中的暴力內(nèi)容會(huì)扭曲孩子們的價(jià)值觀，讓他們變得富有侵略性，產(chǎn)生對(duì)于暴力的崇拜，并且錯(cuò)誤地認(rèn)為采用暴力手段解決問(wèn)題是合適的。

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　　The growth of children relies on many factors, including parents, teachers, media, peers and so forth. Personally, I concur that the family of origin is less weighty than other factors combined, and my reasons would be expounded as below. Admittedly, the influence of family on children is very deep, because parents, initial teachers in the life of children, set the first role models for them to learn and imitate, and which would be logged into the impressionable childhood mind and would determine basic behaviors and thoughts of them. For example, by observing and learning the daily activities of parents, like speaking, cooking and house cleaning, washing hands before eating, a child can master the language, self-care ability and hygienic habits. Besides, parents also play a key role in developing the intelligence of children. For instance, with day-to-day teaching, communication and storytelling, a parent can help a child to improve cognition like basic mathematic calculation, memorizing, reading, and thinking and judging in a proper way. However, I strongly believe outside-of-home elements make greater contributions to the overall growth of children. Firstly, in terms of academic education, teachers in school have priority over parents. For example, compared with some parent who have low-level or even no education, teachers are professionally educated and trained in formal university, and well-experienced in teaching. That is to say, school teachers are more advantageous and influential, in terms of comprehensively and accurately instructing, explaining and demonstrating common knowledge about laws of nature and universe, theories and formulas of math and physics, and events and people in history. What is more, forming social skills also relies on a school environment where children have opportunities to communicate, play and argue with other peers. This strong interpersonal interaction can make children proficient in real-world socialization. Besides, mass media is another external factor affecting children’s development. For example, violent video on the Internet, TV programs and computer games are very likely to twist social values of the young audience, because children, unlike adults, are lack of abilities to distinguish right from wrong. Therefore, with long-term exposure to ill information, children would be rude, aggressive and self-eccentric. As a result, they, more often than not, consider violence as the main or even only way to solve problems, which leads to school bullying. In summary, when it comes to the influence degrees, other respects such as school teachers and media override the parents alone, for the reasons that the formers have incomparable impacts on the education, social skills and characters of children.(419字)