2016年7月9日雅思寫(xiě)作機(jī)經(jīng)及解析(網(wǎng)友版)

　　7.9雅思A類(lèi)小作文線圖：五個(gè)國(guó)家男女收入不同的百分比。

　　大作文回憶版本一：孩子們花很多時(shí)間看電視、很少的時(shí)間做有創(chuàng)造性的事，原因和解決辦法。

　　大作文回憶版本二：There are many advertisements directed at children, such as snacks, toys and other goods. Parents argue that children are under pressure. Advertisers claim that the advertisements provide useful information. Discuss.

　　There are many advertisements directed at children, such as snacks, toys and other goods. Parents argue that children are under pressure. Advertisers claim that the advertisements provide useful information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(僅供參考)

　　大作文分析：

　　此次大作文考察的為廣告類(lèi)話(huà)題，也是一道老題目。題目中提出了對(duì)立雙方：父母認(rèn)為孩子們比較受廣告影響，從而產(chǎn)生一定壓力;廣告商則認(rèn)為廣告本身能夠提供大量有用信息。

　　范文：(word count:289)

　　As children grow to be the target group of advertisementindustry, a range of advertisements aimed at them have been produced, which has caused somecontroversies in the society.

　　Those who advocate the spread ofadvertising targeted at children deem that these advertisements canprovide potential customers with a comprehensive understanding of the productsadvertised, which can help consumers make well-informed buying decisions. Since television advertisements can presentgoods in a visual and audio way, this can definitely enhance people’s knowledgeof the advertised goods, especially some electronic toys or newly-introducedfood.

　　On the other hand, parents are concernedthat children are easily attracted by the vivid advertisements from theInternet or television, and because of it, kids will pester their parents tobuy the goods advertised. Obviously, children are a group of consumers withoutthe ability to differentiate good from bad and right from wrong. If they areconvinced with the benefits of the products from the advertisement, they wouldnot consider the negative aspects or further explore the truth of theadvertisement itself.

　　Besides, peer pressure is another pointwhich needs to be mentioned here. The widespread advertising campaign will makethe public overwhelmed by these advertisements, which means there will alwaysbe some parents and children purchasing the advertised goods, and therefore,some psychological factor of children may urge a part of them to obtain the productseven though they may not need the goods.