今天,通過一篇雅思寫作作文分析,深度思考下有關(guān)“自由與規(guī)則”的話題。
考試題目:in modern society, some people thinkrules and laws restrain people from their freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
文章可分為四段。第一段引出文章話題,認(rèn)為規(guī)則并非扼殺自由之靈魂,而是保障了自由;第二段則是先抑后揚,承認(rèn)規(guī)則從一定程度上限制了自由,其實有效地保護(hù)了人民的利益。第三段論證其觀點:自由是相對的,規(guī)矩和法律實質(zhì)上保護(hù)了大多數(shù)人,且規(guī)則有其歷史淵源。最后一段,舉出反例,要求人們依然盡可能地遵守規(guī)則。
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Freedom is to rule what a flame is to an iceberg. Enemies or friends, different people havedifferent views on this debate. Some believe that rules and laws kill the soul of freedom in themodern society. However, I believe that it is the regulations that protect the surroundings offreedom and civil rights indeed.
Frankly, drawing up too many rules and laws without limitations will obstruct the path ofseeking freedom. Namely, people will not pursue freedom with the heavy loss of other benefits, even the loss of their lives. However, this situation only occurs in rare conditions like warfareor regime shift. In fact, reasonable regulations protect rather than destroy freedom.
When it comes to how rules and laws guarantee people's freedom, there are three waysobviously. Firstly, freedom, with a fancy name, is a relative and subtle thing, which can neverbe ascertained by certain definitions and conditions. No absolute freedom results inimpossibility to pursue absolute freedom. Secondly, absolute freedom will bring about aweird situation that people who focus on their own benefits would demolish others' benefits ifno regulation is established in society. In other words, most rules and laws play roles inshielding the public order and benefits. Lastly, laws and rules also have culturalimplications in ageneral view. At least, they should be regarded as human's legacy, historically andtraditionally.
All in all, without laws and rules, society will be in chaos undoubtedly. To seek morefreedom, we should try to adapt to all the sound rules as a compromise at first.