【范文賞析】：

　　{首段}：背景介紹 + 爭議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)

　　Health is to every individual what perfume is to flowers. However, people have been pondering, for many years, the significance of maintaining personal health without reaching any definite consensus. A popular belief is that personal health only serves the good of the community. As I see it，optimizing personal health could not only benefit the society，but importantly，conduce to individual life, family harmony and career prosperity.

　　【解析】：

　　1. Health is to every individual what perfume is to flowers. 健康對(duì)于每個(gè)人，如同花香對(duì)于花朵。

　　2. a popular belief is that ……一種流行的觀點(diǎn)就是……

　　3. optimizing personal health v 完善個(gè)人健康

　　4. conduce to individual life, family harmony and career prosperity v有助于個(gè)人生活，家庭和睦，事業(yè)輝煌

　　{二段}：為何保持健康是盡到了社會(huì)責(zé)任

　　Indeed, I have to concede that keeping fit could be of great benefits for a nation and therefore be deemed as the personal obligation to the community. In other words, As for the country，the increased proportion of wholesome citizens could greatly diminish the consumption in terms of the public medical treatment. Also, health indicates good mentality and vigorous physique. It is conceivable that the increase of healthy social citizens can help create immense social value and thus inject new vitality into the further prosperity of a nation.

　　【解析】：

　　1. could be of great benefits for a nation v對(duì)于國家有利好

　　2. The increased proportion of wholesome citizens could greatly diminish the consumption in terms of the public medical treatment. 健康公民的增加會(huì)減少社會(huì)公共醫(yī)療的消耗。

　　3. Health indicates good mentality and vigorous physique. 健康意味著健良好的心態(tài)和充沛的體能。

　　4. create immense social value and thus inject new vitality into the further development of a nation v 創(chuàng)造巨大的價(jià)值，為國家的發(fā)展注入新鮮活力。

　　{三段}：為何保持健康對(duì)于個(gè)人有利好

　　Nevertheless，every individual could become the beneficiary of keeping fit too. First, a man with sound physique and mentality succeed better at work，respond better to stress, suffer less depressive mood and achieve more personal goals. Secondly, health could, to a large extent, enable one to brave career enthusiastically and harmonize family optimistically. For example, many entrepreneurs or super stars usually suffer from various health-related problems due to excessive workload and huge mental pressure. It is conceivable that one’s poor health condition will inevitably bring a sea of agonies to the family members. Last, remaining health enables one to regenerate energy, refresh mind and thus improve the efficiency of work and study.

　　【解析】：

　　1. Every individual could become the beneficiary of　……　人人都可以成為……的受益者

　　2. A man with sound physique and mentality people succeed better at work，respond better to stress, suffer less depressive mood and achieve more personal goals. 身心健康者工作更有成效，積極應(yīng)對(duì)壓力，較少沮喪，可以實(shí)現(xiàn)更多個(gè)人目標(biāo)。

　　3. …… enable one to brave career enthusiastically and harmonize family optimistically. …… 使人精力充沛地應(yīng)對(duì)事業(yè)的挑戰(zhàn)，以及樂觀地實(shí)現(xiàn)家庭的和諧。

　　4. …… will inevitably bring a sea of agonies to the family members …… 不可避免地給健康帶來巨大的痛苦

　　5. Remaining health enables one to regenerate energy, refresh mind and thus improve the efficiency of work and study. 保持健康使人恢復(fù)體能，清醒頭腦，因此，提高工作和學(xué)習(xí)的效率。

　　尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn)：

　　In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that keeping fit is not only related to social responsibility but also links to personal happiness, which is more significant. Therefore, embarking on a healthier lifestyle should a lifelong habit for every one of us.

　　【解析】：

　　1. Keeping fit is not only related to social responsibility but also links to personal happiness, which is more significant. 保持健康，不僅僅是和社會(huì)責(zé)任相關(guān)，同時(shí)，于個(gè)人幸福相關(guān)，而后者，意義更加重要。

　　2. Embarking on a healthier lifestyle should a lifelong habit for every one of us. 培養(yǎng)健康的生活方式應(yīng)該每個(gè)人應(yīng)該堅(jiān)持的終生的習(xí)慣。