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2016年雅思作文話題及范文(四)

中華考試網(wǎng)   2016-09-14   【

  摘要:接下來為大家?guī)硌潘即笞魑纳鐣缸镱愒掝}(分析利弊題型)的一篇范文:由于犯罪的增加,引入了越來越多的措施來提高城市地區(qū)的安全,這些措施的優(yōu)點大于缺點嗎?。我們一起來看解析和范文!

  Task:More and more measures to improve the security in the urban area have been introduced because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of the measures outweigh the drawbacks?

  思路解析:

  應(yīng)該安裝1:它能及時地發(fā)現(xiàn)和制止那些正在進行的犯罪,這直接降低了社會犯罪率。

  應(yīng)該安裝2:它能24小時的對建筑和街道進行監(jiān)控,這讓很多想犯罪的人放棄犯罪。

  應(yīng)該安裝3:它也能對很多事故,如火災(zāi),發(fā)出及時的警告,這能拯救生命。

  不應(yīng)該安裝:這些嚴(yán)密的監(jiān)控系統(tǒng)剝奪了老百姓的隱私。他們會感覺生活在監(jiān)獄里,隨時都被窺視,這會降低生活中的幸福感。

  參考范文:

  Nowadays, for the sake of public safety, security facilities, staffs and policies are overwhelming in urban areas. In my view, this trend brings more advantages than the disadvantages, and my reasons would be explored as below.

  Apparently, the root cause of increasing crimes and violence in cities is the inadequacy of police supervision, so that installation of security measures in buildings and streets are an effective preventive means by which the safety of urbanites will be improved. Firstly, these measures, such as on-patrol police vehicles, can immediately catch out and stop ongoing illegal activities such as thefts, robberies and vandalism, thus reducing the rate of social crimes in open space directly. Secondly, the universal camera-based monitory system that is 24-hour available plays a key role of deterrent, which reminds the would-be criminals that they have no chance to escape from the supervising of police and the punishment of justice, no matter when or where they plan to committee a crime. Therefore, these potential law offenders would give up their evil desires. In addition to the values of preventing social crimes, the network consisting of omnipresent cameras and sensors also serves as a function of warners. For example, when there emerges a fire, the security system can provides alarm signals to both residents inside and firefighters, thus helping to save people’s poverty and lives.

  However, I have to concede that demerits associated with setting more security devices should never be ignored, and the most worrying aspect is that this behavior violates the basic rights of citizens. In fact, no matter how useful these measures might be in terms of stopping social crimes, they inevitably offend the human privacy, because they automatically watch and record every movement and activity of people. Obviously, the strong supervision of police and monitor system is very likely to turn the living environment into a jail-like place, where every trip is traced and every private life is peeked. Expectedly, what urban residents feel is stress, discomfort, degradation of freedom and well-being, even unpleasure and anger about the government.

  In conclusion, I believe it is worthy for a city to set up more security measures. Although there is a concern of freedom and privacy deprivation to some extent, this method can make great contributions to social-crime prevention, as well as a safer living area.

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