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如何解鎖雅思寫作讓步反駁段

中華考試網(wǎng)   2016-03-08   【

  在雅思考試的聽說讀寫當(dāng)中,寫作無疑是眾多考生最薄弱的環(huán)節(jié)。而取得雅思寫作高分,也是眾多考生夢寐以求的目標(biāo)。從論證的角度來看,一篇高分作文要緊扣主旨,立場清晰;論證有力,邏輯性強。我們常用的論證方法有:解釋說明法、舉例論證法、比較對比法、讓步反駁法。其中, 能夠大大提高文章的論證力度和邏輯性的就是讓步反駁法。在這里,我結(jié)合劍橋雅思官方范文以及一些真題,與烤鴨們分享一下讓步反駁段的寫法。

  雅思寫作讓步反駁段通常用于論證中的反方段,也就是我們不太支持的那一方觀點。在寫反方段時,首先,我們要進行讓步,承認反方觀點存在一定的合理性,進行解釋說明,然后筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn),進行反駁。要記。鹤尣揭尩某浞郑瘩g要反駁的有力。讓我們來看看一篇劍橋雅思官方范文中的讓步反駁段。

  雅思寫作題目:In many countries students have a break to travel or work for a year fromstudy after they graduate from school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

  這篇文章的話題是gap year,在范文的正方段中,考官支持gap year, 認為這種做法好處多多,應(yīng)該鼓勵,然后考官寫反方段,也就是gap year的弊端,這個段落就是一個典型的讓步反駁段,具體如下:

  However,there are certainly dangers in taking time off at this important age. Young adultsmay end up never returning to their school,or finding it difficult to readapt to an academicenvironment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job or to dosomething completely different from a university course.But overall,I think this is less likelytoday,when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.

  分析一下,考官首先承認gap year有弊端和問題,因為經(jīng)歷了gap year之后,有些學(xué)生有可能改變?nèi)松较,不愿回到學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)了,或者即使回校學(xué)習(xí),也很難適應(yīng)學(xué)術(shù)環(huán)境。然后,考官筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn),說但是在如今的社會,上述情況和問題不太可能發(fā)生,因為如果想找到好工作、事業(yè)有成,學(xué)歷是至關(guān)重要的。這個讓步反駁段就寫的非常好,使得整篇文章論證更加有力,邏輯性更強,這篇文章無疑是高分之作。

  不少同學(xué)感覺讓步反駁段比較難寫,不知道從什么角度反駁。我在這里總結(jié)了一些行之有效的反駁方法和反駁角度:

  1) 當(dāng)我們反駁弊端時,我們可以說弊端和問題發(fā)生的可能性小,正如剛才分析的考官范文。此外,我們還可以說弊端是可以解決或者可以轉(zhuǎn)化的。

  比如這個題目:Some people believe that time spent on television,video and computer gamescan be beneficial to children. Others believe that this has negative effects on a child. Discussboth views and give your own opinion. 這個題目是關(guān)于兒童看電視打游戲的利弊,假設(shè)我們的反方是看電視打游戲的弊端,那么讓步反駁段可以這么寫: 不可否認,兒童看電視、打游戲存在弊端和問題(如影響視力和學(xué)習(xí)、容易上癮),但是這些問題是可以解決的:只要父母幫助兒童提高自控能力,合理分配時間,他們就可以從這些休閑活動中受益。范文如下:

  However,spending too much time on TV and games may affect children's study andhealth. Deeply attracted by entertaining TV programs and thrilling computer games,childrentend to watch TV or play games for hours, neglecting their homework or coming exams.Also,too much time spent on TV or games could result in weakened eyesight and lack ofexercises.Nevertheless,with parents' help and instructions,children can enhance their self-control and time-management,which means they are able to use time in the proper way andbenefit from these leisure activities.

  2) 當(dāng)我們寫讓步反駁段時,我們可以說反方觀點適用于一些人或情況,但是不適用于另一些人或情況。

  比如這個題目:Many people can now study at home through distance-learning programs viathe Internet or television. Some people say this kind of education cannot be compared toattending a college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  這個題目是關(guān)于遠程教育和傳統(tǒng)教育(上大學(xué)),假設(shè)我們的反方是遠程教育,那么讓步反駁段可以這么寫:當(dāng)然,我們不能否認遠程教育的優(yōu)點和好處(方便省時、靈活性強),但是這種教育方式不適用于自控力比較差的學(xué)生,他們不能集中注意力學(xué)習(xí),容易分心,學(xué)習(xí)效果差。范文如下:

  On the other hand,we cannot deny the obvious benefits of remote education whichprovides people with more flexibility and convenience. People could choose their favoritecourses and decide when and where to study,following their own paces. Instead of wastingtime on commuting,students could comfortably sit at home and learn a course on line.However,those students who lack self-control and self-discipline cannot learn efficiently inthis way,as they might be distracted by various kinds of things,such as games and videos online.

  希望備考雅思的童鞋們認真領(lǐng)會讓步反駁段的寫法,多寫多練。這個論證方法用的好,一定可以大大提高文章整體的論證力度和邏輯性,令考官眼前一亮,助你獲得雅思寫作高分!

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