Living in Big Cities or Medium and Small Cities?

　　(1) 大學(xué)畢業(yè)后有人選擇留在大城市發(fā)展，有人選擇去中小城市生活

　　(2) 在大城市和中小城市工作、生活的利弊

　　(3) 我的選擇及原因

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　　這是一個(gè)說(shuō)明利弊型的題目，探討了大學(xué)畢業(yè)生就業(yè)選擇的問題，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)當(dāng)圍繞提綱進(jìn)行構(gòu)思：① 第一段簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明這一現(xiàn)象，即有人畢業(yè)后選擇留在大城市發(fā)展，有人選擇去中小城市生活;第二段具體說(shuō)明在大城市與在中小城市工作、生活的利弊;第三段說(shuō)明自己的選擇及看法。② 寫作時(shí)注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，思路明確，可適當(dāng)使用表示并列或遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的詞組，使文章銜接自然。

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　　Living in Big Cities or Medium and Small Cities?

　�、� We can not choose where we were born, but we can choose where we live during the whole life. ② That’s why after graduation, some students want to stay in big cities like Beijing and Shanghai, while some others might long to live in medium and small cities like Yantai and Ningbo.

　　When referring to the city they’d like to live, different college graduates have different choices. ③ Some insist that big cities are their favorites because there are more opportunities for personal development and more modern facilities that make their lives wonderful and convenient. ③ In addition, they believe that their horizons will be broadened and their potentials will be fully exploited before so many challenges. ④ However, there are a large part of people choosing to live in medium and small cities. ⑤ Firstly, less pressure there will make them live much more comfortable. ⑤ Secondly, the air is fresher than big cities. Therefore, it will be beneficial to their health.

　　⑥ Personally speaking, I’d rather choose to go to big cities because personal development ⑦ rather than comfort is what I have been pursuing.

　　Analysis

　�、� 描述背景。

　�、� 表語(yǔ)從句描繪出大學(xué)畢業(yè)生的不同選擇。

　�、� 分三點(diǎn)詳述留在大城市發(fā)展的優(yōu)勢(shì)：更多機(jī)會(huì)、開闊眼界、開發(fā)潛能。

　　④ 引出相反的觀點(diǎn)。

　�、� 層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。

　　⑥ 表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。

　�、� “而不是”。

　　舉一反三

　　Some insist that big cities are their favorites because there are more opportunities for personal development and more modern facilities that make their lives wonderful and convenient.

　　a. Some think that big cities are their favorites for the reason that there are more opportunities for personal development and more modern facilities that make their lives wonderful and convenient.

　　b. Some hold on the opinion that big cities are their favorites considering there are more opportunities for personal development and more modern facilities that make their lives wonderful and convenient.