2018年12月大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文真題解析

　　一、大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫作題目預(yù)覽

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to balance ① work and leisure /② job responsibilities and personal interests / ③ academic study and extracurricular activities. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

　　第一套題是“如何平衡工作和生活?yuàn)蕵?lè)時(shí)光”，這就是我們預(yù)測(cè)班講到的“勞逸結(jié)合”那道題。第二道題，是“如何平衡個(gè)工作責(zé)任和個(gè)人利益”，還是“如何平衡工作責(zé)任和個(gè)人興趣愛(ài)好”呢?牛津辭典對(duì)interests的解釋是，“業(yè)余愛(ài)好”，也就是你的愛(ài)好、興趣所在。我們的預(yù)測(cè)范文“以興趣為導(dǎo)向還是以市場(chǎng)為導(dǎo)向”命中了一半。第三道題，“如何平衡學(xué)業(yè)和課外活動(dòng)”。稍微給這次六級(jí)進(jìn)行一個(gè)總評(píng)，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，現(xiàn)在六級(jí)題目出的非常好，只不過(guò)上面的題目單詞有一些難，但這些難絕對(duì)沒(méi)有超綱。難度較6月份，甚至17年、16年都沒(méi)有特別大的起伏。話題更加接地氣，它比6月份如何建立雇主雇員的關(guān)系，如何建立消費(fèi)者和商家信任，可能稍微有一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)難。它讓你平衡工作、學(xué)業(yè)、課外活動(dòng)、工作責(zé)任。六級(jí)題更加偏重于大三、大四學(xué)生即將面對(duì)工作和學(xué)業(yè)選擇的學(xué)生。

　　寫作基本思路是：

　　l 開頭段：引出話題，現(xiàn)象或者闡明平衡的重要性

　　l 中間段：

　　平衡工作和娛樂(lè)：安排時(shí)間，提高效率，防止過(guò)勞死

　　平衡工作責(zé)任和業(yè)余興趣

　　平衡學(xué)業(yè)和課外活動(dòng)：學(xué)業(yè)為主，合理安排時(shí)間，勞逸結(jié)合

　　l 結(jié)尾段：觀點(diǎn)的歸納總結(jié)，重申重要性

　　這三套題任意一套題都可以用這個(gè)思路寫，開頭段引出話題，如何平衡，為什么要平衡;或者開篇闡明平衡A和B——課外活動(dòng)和學(xué)業(yè)、工作責(zé)任和個(gè)人興趣愛(ài)好、工作和業(yè)余活動(dòng)之間平衡的重要性。第二段，“平衡工作和娛樂(lè)”，或者說(shuō)“平衡工作責(zé)任和業(yè)余興趣愛(ài)好”，是可以共用的。你都可以合理安排時(shí)間，還可以提高你的工作效率，這樣你就有時(shí)間娛樂(lè)或者培養(yǎng)你的興趣愛(ài)好。把身心健康擺在第一位，業(yè)余興趣愛(ài)好，勞逸結(jié)合。它們可以共用一套邏輯。第三套題，平衡學(xué)習(xí)和課外活動(dòng)，我們還是要兼顧二者，學(xué)業(yè)為重，沒(méi)有在學(xué)校里面學(xué)到的知識(shí)和技能，今后出去創(chuàng)業(yè)、就業(yè)，都會(huì)有困難。第三段，把你觀點(diǎn)歸納總結(jié)，重申一下平衡他們的重要性。

　　二、寫作分值評(píng)估標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

　　寫作滿分 = 獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分 + 基本分

　　獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分：字跡、卷面、閃光點(diǎn)

　　基本分：語(yǔ)言、結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容

　　寫作分?jǐn)?shù)檔次：0分，2分，5分，7分，11分，14分

　　關(guān)于寫作框架：

　　一、引出話題(+圖畫/ 表描述 or 諺語(yǔ)引出 or 個(gè)人觀點(diǎn))

　　二、闡釋話題(原因后果、對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)、舉例論證)

　　三、個(gè)人評(píng)論 +建議措施 + 憧憬未來(lái)

　　這次考試沒(méi)有圖畫圖表描述，直接引出觀點(diǎn)即可。第二段，重點(diǎn)是原因后果、對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)、舉例論證，這次題目可以用對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)、舉例論證。第三段個(gè)人歸納總結(jié)，可以給出一些建議措施，告訴別人，如何勞逸結(jié)合、如何平衡工作和生活，最后憧憬回來(lái)。

　　關(guān)于結(jié)構(gòu)：需要使用表示結(jié)構(gòu)的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，這樣能夠讓你的文章邏輯清晰。如，F(xiàn)irstly, Secondly, Finally, To begin with, In addition, Last but not least, For one thing, For another。

　　關(guān)于內(nèi)容：

　　主題段落論證——

　�、僮h論文：各方觀點(diǎn)

　�、谡f(shuō)明文：原因后果

　　③記敘文：舉例論證

　　關(guān)于語(yǔ)言，準(zhǔn)確是第一要?jiǎng)?wù)，拼寫不能錯(cuò)。語(yǔ)言句型多樣化，我們要學(xué)會(huì)一些高端的或者復(fù)雜的句型，比如說(shuō)倒裝句，我們憧憬未來(lái)的時(shí)候就可以用到。還有一些從句，還有諺語(yǔ)警句。比如，People often say, “All work and no playing makes Jack a dull boy.” Ironically, it is easier said than done. 或者，“It is hard to balance … and … ” is an old cliché, but I totally agree with it. 這兩句話都可以給大家文章里面增加亮點(diǎn)。

　　三、最新真題范文

　　2018年12月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文真題答案卷一

　　For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to balance academic study and extracurricular activities。 You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

　　第一段：學(xué)術(shù)學(xué)習(xí)和課外活動(dòng)同等重要

　　第二段：分析重要性的原因。

　　第三段：得出結(jié)論。

　　It is generally agreed that academic study has been playing a crucial role in students’ life。 Nevertheless， we should not neglect the equal importance of extracurricular activities which can help us to build confidence and enhance overall abilities。

　　A number of factors might account for participating in both academic study and extracurricular activities。 With respect to academic study， one of the most common factors is to facilitate our academic competence。 There’s no doubt that study is the priority to students， and the academic performance， to a large extent， determines whether we can enter a prestigious school and get a decent job。 As for extracurricular activities， it is worth mentioning that it can supplement what we cannot learn from schools， such as the ability of critical thinking， problem-solving and addressing interpersonal relationship。

　　In view of how to balance academic study and extracurricular activities， effective measures should be taken into consideration。 In my perspective， the most useful technique is to promote our efficiency。 Only if can we manage our time well， we can have more time to do the both things。 To be more specific， a to-do list is highly recommended so that we can draw a clear picture of what we are going to do and distribute time to academic study and extracurricular activities in a more effective and balanced way。 With the efforts concerned， the imbalance will no longer be a problem。

　　2018年12月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文真題答案卷二

　　For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to balance work and leisure。 You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

　　第一段：描述工作和業(yè)余很難平衡的一個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。

　　第二段：進(jìn)行觀點(diǎn)的闡述。

　　第三段：得出結(jié)論。

　　Along with the development of society， more and more problems are brought to our attention; one of the most serious problems is how to reach the balance between work and leisure。 People have different attitudes towards the problem。

　　It is generally agreed that work has been playing an increasingly important role in our life， because we need to work to earn money for life。 But if people put too much time on work， their health conditions will be damaged and suffer from kinds of diseases。 The sub health among workers has attracted extensive attention of the society， which can be found in TV programs， newspapers， university classes and many aspect of our everyday life。 Thus， when people has a completed the work responsibility， they should spend some time on personal leisure。 Then， they could get some rest both physically and mentally， and have better conditions for tomorrow’s work。 However， if people invest too much time on leisure， their career developments may be affected and lost opportunities for a better life。

　　From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw the conclusions that people should ensure their leisure time after work。

　　2018年12月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文真題答案卷三

　　For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to balance job responsibilities and personal interests。 You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

　　第一段：描述工作責(zé)任和個(gè)人興趣很難平衡的一個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。

　　第二段：進(jìn)行觀點(diǎn)的闡述。

　　第三段：得出結(jié)論。

　　Along with the development of society， more and more problems are brought to our attention; one of the most serious problems is how to reach the balance between job responsibilities and personal interests。 People have different attitudes towards the problem。

　　It is generally agreed that job responsibilities has been playing an increasingly important role in our life， because we need to complete them to earn money for life。 But if people put too much time on work， their mental conditions will be damaged and suffer from kinds of diseases。 The sub health of workers has attracted extensive attention of the society， which can be found in TV programs， newspapers， university classes and many aspect of our everyday life。 Thus， in addition to work responsibility， people should develop personal interests using spare time。 Then， they could enjoy the life and get rest both physically and mentally。 However， if people invest too much time on personal interests， their career developments may be affected and lost opportunities for a better life。

　　From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw the conclusions that people should focus on work responsibility during work time and develop personal interests on spare time。

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