2017年12月英語六級寫作范文：大學(xué)生攀比

　　【題目】

　　University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands

　　1. 現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生都追求穿名牌，用名牌

　　2. 你對這種現(xiàn)象的看法

　　審題概述

　　這是一篇論述對大學(xué)生追求和使用名牌看法的文章。第一段，詳述大學(xué)生熱衷追求、使

　　用名牌的情形以及人們的看法。第二段，重點談你對此的看法。

　　【范文】

　　University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands

　　“What perfumes are you wearing?” “Aren’t your shoes Nike’s latest release?” “I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday.” “I hear the Jack & Jones store is on sale this week. Do you wanna come along?” Don’t feel surprised if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students. It’s quite common to hear and see college students swapping information about the brands they like and the products they use. In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students’ favourite pastimes. They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience. “Keeping up with the Joneses” is their conviction – “If the Joneses have it, how could I have not?”

　　About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval. They’ll probably take it to be a reflection of the students’ vanity and superficiality. And they may lecture them on the virtue of being thrifty.

　　However, I beg to differ. For one thing, name-brand products are usually quality products. As such, they are something beautiful, endurable, and reliable. “The love of beauty is common to all,” goes the proverb; therefore, there’s nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands. For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions. Likewise, they must abide by the consequences if they make an ill-advised one. If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues, they should be able to correct their mistakes and keep everything in moderation. So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management, isn’t it?

　　【解析】

　　第一段思路點評：

　　本段分為兩個部分，即詳細陳述大學(xué)生追求和使用名牌的情況，以及人們對此的看法。

　　語言點提示：

　　(1)keeping up with the Joneses要在地位和物質(zhì)上比得上周圍的人

　　(2)conviction堅定的信仰、看法

　　(3)vanity and superficiality虛榮心和面子觀(膚淺、表面、淺薄)

　　第二段思路點評：

　　本段應(yīng)辯證地分析大學(xué)生追求、使用名牌的現(xiàn)象，既有對此肯定的看法，也有否定的看法，即大學(xué)生在追求和使用名牌中汲取經(jīng)驗教訓(xùn)并學(xué)會管理。

　　語言點提示：

　　(1)abide by the consequences自食其果

　　(2)ill-advised考慮不周的、不明智的

　　(3)in moderation適度、不過分