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2017年12月大學英語四級作文真題解析

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  四級的題型包括論說文、說明文、記敘文。2017年6月份我們考的是考應用文,賣的是二手車、二手電腦,12月份考的是文字當中的A或者B的形式,到底是工作還是考研,到底是國企還是外企。2017年12月考到的是大家關(guān)心的醫(yī)鬧問題,同學感覺到這個問題比較傷感。醫(yī)鬧怎么說?我們可以翻成“醫(yī)療的一些問題、爭端或者沖突”等等。這是第一套題。第二套題,講的是所謂的老師和學生之間的關(guān)系如何營造。第三套題,父母和孩子的關(guān)系。

  大家發(fā)現(xiàn)這道題從審題的難度來講基本長沒有什么難度,基本上是初中、小學詞匯,題干不會出現(xiàn)什么問題。 “How to”題型已經(jīng)考過三次,重點在如何(how),也就是說我們重點是方法。從內(nèi)容上來講,但是發(fā)現(xiàn)這三道考題之間的關(guān)系是大家非常熟悉的話題,比說醫(yī)鬧關(guān)系,醫(yī)生和患者之間的關(guān)系,老師和學生的關(guān)系,這是教育的話題,再比如家長和孩子之間的關(guān)系等等,所以從題材到內(nèi)容來說都是四級考生已經(jīng)必備的知識要素。

  我們的四六級的寫作滿分是15分,包括兩部分,第一是獎勵分,第二是基本分的部分。

  首先,獎勵分是卷面的問題,大家都喜歡美的事物。也就是說要保持卷面清晰,給老師留下好的第一印象。第二是基本分。這里包括三部分。

  2017年12月英語四級作文:醫(yī)患關(guān)系

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to best handle the relationship between doctors and patients. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

  【解析】

  題材: 單一命題議論文;

  要求: 給建議;

  話題: 如何最好地處理醫(yī)生和病人的關(guān)系

  觀點: 和諧醫(yī)患關(guān)系很重要

  方法: 醫(yī)生提高職業(yè)能力;病人提高素質(zhì)

  首段設計:引話題+明主旨

  1.眾所周知+現(xiàn)狀描述,背景介紹。2. 我認為+觀點

  It is beyond dispute that the increasingly nervous relationship between doctors and patients has triggered a rather widespread concern among the general public, as numerous reports about medical negligence have been unveiled continually. I am of an opinion that there is no more significance than keeping a harmonious physician-patient relation.

  中間段設計:方法如下+方法分析

  1.方法如下。2. 方法一:提高職業(yè)能力。(分析原因結(jié)果)3. 方法二:病人要提高素質(zhì)。(分析原因結(jié)果)4. 數(shù)據(jù)/例子

  Several possible measures relating to relieve the tension of doctor-patient relationship are included as follows. For one thing, owing to the fact that doctors in some local hospitals who lack the medical skills are not trusted fully by the public, they ought to improve their occupational qualities to assure the safety of medical work. For another, for patients, they should learn to trust and appreciate doctors because of their professional skills. Take my recent experience in hospital for instance. It was effective communication between me and my surgeon that enabled the operation more smoothly.

  結(jié)尾段設計:總結(jié)+展望

  1. 總結(jié)。2. 展望

  Establishing a doctor-patient trust relationship, all in all, has brought about a series of positive effects on every aspect of life. Only by making collective efforts from both two sides can the relationship be prompted.

  【參考范文】

  Recent years, the relationship between doctors and patients has been a heated topic. However, with the increasingly serious physician-patient relationship, it is important to find out some ways to solve the problem. Therefore, some measures mentioned below are the most important aspects that we should take into consideration.

  On the one hand, it is indispensable that communication between doctor and patients should be strengthened due to the the fact that doctor-patient communication can be seen as a bridge of two-way communication between doctors and patients, which is beneficial for them to improve their relationship. As a matter of fact, although sometimes there are some defects in medical infrastructure, patients can make allowance for them friendly for their good relationship. On the other hand, the most important character doctor should have is professional ethics that is the foremost way to gain trust from patients.

  All in all, it is high time that both hospitals and patients should take some steps to deal with current poor relationship. Only in this way, can we create a harmonious society.

  2017年12月英語四級作文:親子關(guān)系

  【題目】

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to best handle the relationship between parents and children. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

  【參考范文】

  As we widely know that the relationship between parents and children plays a significant role in the domestic relationship, which not only serves as crucial bridge to build trust and connection between two generations but also exerts a profound and subtle influence toward to children’s personal growth.

  In order to strengthen the relationship, it is imperative to cultivate the respect between generations, which not only includes the respect to parents from children but also the other way around. Furthermore, it is sensible for the parents to spend more time on the company with their children, enhancing the affection between each other. Finally, it is wise for the parents to set an example rather than make demands, enabling the children to follow and achieve spiritual development.

  To sum up, the sound relationship between two generations requires the integration of numerous measures derived from the joint effort of parents, children and schools.

  【參考譯文】

  我們都很清楚父母與子女關(guān)系在家庭關(guān)系當中扮演著重要的角色,不僅是一座建立代際信任和連接的橋梁,也會給孩子個人的成長帶來深遠和微妙的影響。

  為了加強這種關(guān)系,應該培養(yǎng)代際之間的尊重,不光是子女對父母的尊重,也包括父母對子女的尊重。另外,父母應該多陪陪子女,加強互相之間的感情培養(yǎng)。最后,父母與其只對子女提出要求,不如做個榜樣讓孩子去效仿并且獲得精神上的成長。

  總之,代際間的良好關(guān)系需要結(jié)合各種措施,也需要父母,孩子以及學校的共同努力。

  【范文解析】

  本次英語四級考試話題和考生的生活息息相關(guān),相關(guān)的內(nèi)容和論點并不難想出。在語言表達的過程中,要做到詞語的多樣性和句子的多元化,要做到邏輯清晰,詳略得當。首先,對父母和子女關(guān)系進行整體的概括,然后中間段解決題目當中所提出的如何加強關(guān)系的問題,最后進行總結(jié),即要求各方努力才能夠?qū)崿F(xiàn)。

  四級的題型包括論說文、說明文、記敘文。2017年6月份我們考的是考應用文,賣的是二手車、二手電腦,12月份考的是文字當中的A或者B的形式,到底是工作還是考研,到底是國企還是外企。2017年12月考到的是大家關(guān)心的醫(yī)鬧問題,同學感覺到這個問題比較傷感。醫(yī)鬧怎么說?我們可以翻成“醫(yī)療的一些問題、爭端或者沖突”等等。這是第一套題。第二套題,講的是所謂的老師和學生之間的關(guān)系如何營造。第三套題,父母和孩子的關(guān)系。

  大家發(fā)現(xiàn)這道題從審題的難度來講基本長沒有什么難度,基本上是初中、小學詞匯,題干不會出現(xiàn)什么問題。 “How to”題型已經(jīng)考過三次,重點在如何(how),也就是說我們重點是方法。從內(nèi)容上來講,但是發(fā)現(xiàn)這三道考題之間的關(guān)系是大家非常熟悉的話題,比說醫(yī)鬧關(guān)系,醫(yī)生和患者之間的關(guān)系,老師和學生的關(guān)系,這是教育的話題,再比如家長和孩子之間的關(guān)系等等,所以從題材到內(nèi)容來說都是四級考生已經(jīng)必備的知識要素。

  我們的四六級的寫作滿分是15分,包括兩部分,第一是獎勵分,第二是基本分的部分。

  首先,獎勵分是卷面的問題,大家都喜歡美的事物。也就是說要保持卷面清晰,給老師留下好的第一印象。第二是基本分。這里包括三部分。

  第一是文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。

  我們在寫作文的時候分三個層次,總分總的原則,第一自然段我們一定要進行引題部分,第二是分析,第三是總結(jié)。第一段把醫(yī)患關(guān)系,家長和孩子關(guān)系,學生和老師的關(guān)系等等,這些核心的主題詞引導出來。

  第二是分析。根據(jù)不同文章的要求,不同文章的題材進行分析的過程。重點在方法、建議的措施上。所以這個文章中間分析的環(huán)節(jié),重點講的是建議、措施和方法。

  第三是總結(jié)。注意要加上所謂邏輯關(guān)系詞。比如三個方法,或者是三個建議的措施,三個原因,三個危害等等。

  這是英語考試,大家一定要想清楚我們每句話首先保證的是準確,其次保證的是漂亮。如何保證準確漂亮?第一個是詞的運用,我們在剛才的文章當中,是否出現(xiàn)了“重要important”這個單詞,你可以換一些高級的詞匯essential,當你把這些常見的單詞進行高級化的替換以后,你的分值就會提高。再說一下句型的文化。好的文章,不僅是句子準確,還要考慮句子的高級化。比如說你是否運用了非謂語動詞等高級語法。

  2017年12月英語四級作文:師生關(guān)系

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to best handle the relationship between teachers and students. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

  作文題目要求寫一篇關(guān)于how to best handle the relationship between teachers and students(如何恰當處理師生關(guān)系)的作文,字數(shù)120-180。常見表達如下:

  當今社會,應該如何建立和維系良好的師生關(guān)系是一個古老又嶄新的話題。

  In recent society, how to construct and maintian a good relationship between teachers and students is a topic both old and new.

  擺脫傳統(tǒng)觀念的束縛是建立平等友好的師生關(guān)系的根本因素。

  It is a radical factor to break away from the constraint of conventional view for the construction of an equal and friendly teacher-student relationship.

  想要處理好師生關(guān)系,老師需要更好地了解學生,成為學生的良師益友。

  In order to appropriately handle teacher-student relationship, it is necessary for teachers to get a better understanding of students and to become students’ good teachers and helpful friends.

  眾所周知,和諧的師生關(guān)系在教育中起到至關(guān)重要的作用,它既反映了社會政治、經(jīng)濟、文化、道德關(guān)系。

  It is widely known that a harmonious teacher-student relationship plays a crucial role in education, which reflects relationships among policy, economy, culture and ethic.

  因而建立和諧的師生關(guān)系是對教育者提出的最為基本的要求、同時也是教育改革發(fā)展的必然趨勢。這是因為師生關(guān)系不同于一般的社會關(guān)系。

  Thus to construct a good teacher-student relationship is an essential requirement for educators as well as an inevitable tendency for educational reform and development due to the fact that teacher-student relationship is quite different from common social relationships.

  隨著社會和文化的迅速發(fā)展,對新型師生關(guān)系的需要日趨明顯。

  With society and culture developing rapidly, there is an increasingly obvious demand for a new relationship between teachers and students beyong the traditional one.

  根據(jù)以上分析,我們可以得出這樣的結(jié)論:和諧的師生關(guān)系對教育的發(fā)展至關(guān)重要。教育部分應該采取有效措施來培養(yǎng)和發(fā)展良好的師生關(guān)系。

  According to what has been discussed above, we can come to a conclusion that a harmonious relationship between teachers and students is of great significance to educational development. It is imperative for our educational department to take effective measures to cultivate and develop a good teacher-student relationship.

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