2019年大學英語四級寫作練習題：志愿者

　　大學英語四級寫作練習題

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of On Being Volunteers. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

　　1. 1.現(xiàn)在很多大型活動都需要志愿者;

　　2.做志愿者的利弊;

　　3.如果我有機會做志愿者的話，我會……

　　大學英語四級寫作參考范文

　　On Being Volunteers

　　With China becoming increasingly prosperous by the day, large-scale events such as world expositions and sports games frequent this hot land, virtually all of which are thirsty for a large number of volunteers.

　　Apart from gaining some working and social experiences, the realistic advantages to serving as a volunteer are also obvious. Volunteers for the World Expo in Shanghai, for instance, may visit any pavilion after work, which makes them the envy of billions of queuers; likewise, volunteers of Beijing Olympics got allowances, quality uniforms, free riding of bus and metro, etc. More beneficially, their experience may add luster to their resume in job-hunting. But as the saying goes, "A penny has two sides. " The disadvantages to being volunteers are also elephants in the room. Doing voluntary jobs is undoubtedly time-consuming, and to those students, the majority of volunteers, the sacrifice is not only time but their school work. Besides, longtime exposure to various unexpected weather may do great harm to their health.

　　But anyway, if I have a chance to be a volunteer, I am sure to try my utmost, because during the course, I will learn how to carry out better team work and how to cope with emergencies, etc. , thus I will mature sooner than otherwise.

　　大學英語四級寫作評析

　　這是一篇以分析某現(xiàn)象的利弊為主的說明文。

　　第一段用一句話說明了現(xiàn)在很多大型活動頻頻在中國舉辦(with引導的短語簡要指出原因：中國日益繁榮)，它們都需要志愿者這一現(xiàn)象。其中語言亮點有increasingly修飾形容詞prosperous，表示“越來越”;by the day表示“日益”;large-scale events表示“大規(guī)模的活動”;frequent作動詞，表示“頻頻發(fā)生”;virtually修飾all，表示“幾乎”;of which介詞+關(guān)系代詞，引導定語從句，使句型出現(xiàn)變化;be thirsty for使用了擬人的手法，表達“迫切需要”。

　　第二段分析了做志愿者的利弊。第一句以Apart from開頭，引出了兩個“利”——獲得工作、社會經(jīng)驗以及一些現(xiàn)實性的好處，隨后舉了北京奧運會和上海世博會作為后者的例證(likewise自然地把兩個例子銜接到了一起)，并用More beneficially說明前者對找工作更有幫助。在轉(zhuǎn)折到“弊”時，用了諺語(But as the saying goes, "A penny, has two sides.")，而成語elephants in the room表示“明顯的”，也是閃光用詞。Besides連接了兩個弊端——耗費時間、影響健康。

　　最后一段表明了自己的態(tài)度——如果有機會，將竭盡全力做好志愿者，同時簡要說明了理由：學會合作和應(yīng)急以便更快地成熟起來。開頭的But anyway“但不管怎樣(盡管有上述的弊端)”屬于過渡詞，把第二段和第三段自然銜接到了一起。

　　熱點關(guān)注：2018年大學英語四級寫作范文(315篇)