姓名

姚明

劉翔

鞏俐

劉嘉玲

胡軍

余華

職業(yè)

運動員

運動員

演員

演員

演員

作家

排名

1

4

5

8

9

96

第一段 概述圖表

1.From the chart/graph/table/picture, we clearly learn that總述現(xiàn)象、變化或問題。2.圖表中初期的數(shù)據(jù)或情況。3.However, 圖表中數(shù)據(jù)或情況的變化。

第一段 概述圖表

1. 主題句：概括圖表所反映的總體現(xiàn)象、變化或問題。

2. 擴展句一：概述圖表中顯示的初期的數(shù)據(jù)或情況

3. 擴展句三：概述圖表中數(shù)據(jù)或情況的變化

第二段 說明原因

4.The following reasons can account for現(xiàn)象、變化或問題。5.First of all/ To begin with,第一點原因。6. What is more/Moreover,第二點原因。7.In addition/Besides第三點原因。

第二段 說明原因

4. 主題句：引出下文對原因的說明。

5. 擴展句一：說明第一點原因。

6. 擴展句二：說明第二點原因。

7. 擴展句三：說明第三點原因。

第三段 說明影響、問題或表達觀點

8.From my point of view/As for me, “我“的思考或看法。9.可能的影響、問題或注意事項一。10.Besides，可能的影響、問題或注意事項。11. Therefore/To conclude,作出總結。

第三段 說明影響、問題或表達觀點

8. 主題句：“我”的思考或看法。

9. 擴展句一：第一點影響、問題或注意事項

10. 擴展句二：第二點影響、問題或注意事項

11. 結尾句：經常是提出建議或作出展望。

Do Athletes and entertainers Deserve Such High Salaries?

From the chart above we can see that athletes and entertainers earn much more than writers. Yao Ming, as the most famous basketball star, is the richest while the famous writer Yu Hua has lagged far behind.

The major reason for this phenomenon is that athletes and entertainers get more attention from the public than the writers, and by taking advantages of their fames they can earn money through ads very easily. As we know, writers cannot be more popular than sports or movie stars.

Mayve some people think that this is unfair, for in their opinion, scholars should earn more than stars. But I don’t think so. First, the stars’ salary is just an indication of their hard work and fierce competition; and what’s more, the stars’ splendid career is rather short and many of them have to retire even before their thirties. Finally, the stars bring us so much pleasure and fun, and release us form stressful life. To sum up, they indeed deserve what they have got.

點評

這是一篇圖表作文題。文章第一段描述表格，得出結論：體育、娛樂明星收入遠遠超過作家。

第二段具體分析了產生這種現(xiàn)象的原因。注意The reason for sth. Is that 結構，用來陳述原因。

第三段進行總結，說明明星獲得高收入的原因，指出他們對此當之無愧。

注意連接詞First, what’more, Finally,To sum up的使用，使得文章結構更加緊湊，行文流暢。