【英語四級寫作模擬試題】

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Don’t Rely Too Much on Computers following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

　　1.現(xiàn)在許多人越來越依賴電腦

　　2.過分依賴電腦帶來寫白字等問題

　　3.我的看法

　　【英語四級寫作范文】

　　Don’t Rely Too Much on Computers

　　The invention of computers has changed people’s daily life in a dramatic way. It is possible for people to be socially active without leaving the house, watch videos of almost anything imaginable, play games that feel like real life and get easy access to the best and worst of the world. It is no wonder that a large quantity of people becomes addicted to computers.

　　Spending too much time in front of the computer may results in vision problems, back and neck pain, sleep disturbances, weight gain and Internet addiction. What’s more, over-reliance on computers may lead to ill-spelling abilities and poor academic performance.

　　Undoubtedly, computers are a great addition to our life, and proper and safe use of them should always be a number one priority. Meanwhile, those less-than-pleasant consequences of computer overuse worth considering. Try to take breaks every hour, and periodically look away from the screen to give your eyes a break. Most importantly, don’t let any online activities influence your family relationship.

　　【點評】

　　文章第一段介紹了電腦給人們生活帶來的變化，提及有些人過于依賴電腦;第二段指出使用電腦時間過長引發(fā)的各種問題，說明過分依賴電腦會導(dǎo)致拼寫能力減弱、成績下降;第三段結(jié)合自己的觀點分析了使用電腦的利弊。

　　第一段中in a dramatic way意為“巨大地”， imaginable意為“想得到的”， becomes addicted to意為“對……成癮”;第二段中results in意為“導(dǎo)致”， sleep disturbances意為“睡眠障礙”， lead to意為“導(dǎo)致”;第三段中Undoubtedly意為“毫無疑問”， be a number one priority意為“放在首位”， less-than-pleasant consequences意為“令人不滿意的結(jié)果”。