【參考范文】

　　Certainly, every person has bad habits. Some people may be in the habit of speaking rudely; some tend to be deaf to others’ opinions; some are inclined to delay. However, there is no doubt that allowing to be controlled by bad habits does a great harm to personal development.

　　It is not too much to say that it is a destructive behavior to allow to be controlled by bad habits while it is constructive to change unwanted habits. If bad habits are allowed to be developed, they will get out of control and become big obstacles to life or career. For example, a delayed-prone person will hardly restrain himself from missing the deadline. Understandably, he will have few chances to be entrusted with important tasks and then will barely be professionally experienced enough to gain promotion. On the contrary, it is beneficial to change unwanted habits and acquire good ones, because good habits can make people more competent and thus widen the door to success.

　　In summary, bad habits will probably make it impossible for us to achieve our ambitions. Therefore, we should be alert to our bad habits and make persistent efforts to break them.

　　【中文譯文】

　　當(dāng)然，每個(gè)人都有壞習(xí)慣。一些人可能習(xí)慣說(shuō)話粗魯，一些人習(xí)慣對(duì)別人意見充耳不聞，還有一些人習(xí)慣拖沓。然而，不可否認(rèn)的是允許自己被壞習(xí)慣控制對(duì)于個(gè)人發(fā)展是及其有害的。

　　毫不夸張的說(shuō)：允許自己被壞習(xí)慣控制是破壞性行為，而改變不想要的習(xí)慣則具有建設(shè)意義。如果任由這些壞習(xí)慣發(fā)展，它們會(huì)失去控制，變成生活或事業(yè)上的巨大障礙。比如，一個(gè)有拖延傾向的人很難約束自己在截止日期前完成工作。自然，他將很少有機(jī)會(huì)被委派重要的任務(wù)，也就幾乎不會(huì)具有充足的專業(yè)經(jīng)驗(yàn)獲得晉升。相反，改變不想要的習(xí)慣并且養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣是有益的，因?yàn)楹昧?xí)慣能讓人更有能力，從而面向更為寬敞的成功之門。

　　總之，壞習(xí)慣很可能讓我們無(wú)法實(shí)現(xiàn)志向。因此，我們應(yīng)該警惕自己的壞習(xí)慣并持續(xù)努力去改正它們。

　　【寫作思路】

　　開篇指出雖然每個(gè)人都有壞習(xí)慣，但是放任壞習(xí)慣對(duì)于個(gè)人發(fā)展十分不利。第二段繼續(xù)論證放任壞習(xí)慣對(duì)生活及事業(yè)的危害以及改正壞習(xí)慣的必要性，且舉例說(shuō)明。結(jié)尾進(jìn)行總結(jié)，強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。

　　【亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)】

　　1. be in the habit of doing sth. 有做某事的習(xí)慣，或習(xí)慣做某事

　　2. be deaf to sth. 對(duì)某事充耳不聞

　　3. be inclined to do sth. 同義于tend to do sth. 有做某事的傾向,也就是習(xí)慣做某事

　　4. there is no doubt that+句子 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)的是

　　5. It is not too much to say that+句子 毫不夸張的是

　　6. destructive 破壞性的;constructive 建設(shè)性的

　　7. restrain sb. from doing sth. 約束某人做某事

　　8. be alert to sth. 警惕某事