2016年英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試作文范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)三

　　Nowadays, (1)different people hold different views about whether or not one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Some people think that a good deed should be given a certain reward. They say it is agreeable with the rule of fairness. (2①)Also, rewards can stimulate people’s enthusiasm to do good deeds.

　　(3)However, there are many others who take Leifeng as a model and be always ready to help others without expecting any reward. Everyone may be in trouble.(5)Only if you help others unselfishly, you can get others’ help when you need it. (2②)Besides, they maintain that one can enjoy happiness in doing good deeds, (6)they think, (7)which is the best return.

　　(8)Weighing up these tow arguments, I prefer the second one. (2③)First, being happy to help others is one of Chinese people’s traditional virtues.(2④) Second, this virtue(9) is of more significance for the creation of a harmonious society. (2⑤)To conclude, (10①)it is every citizen’s responsibility(10②)to do good deeds without expecting any reward.

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　(1)用于引出對(duì)某事物的不同觀點(diǎn)。

　　(2)銜接詞語(yǔ)使文章條例清晰、意思連貫。

　　(3)轉(zhuǎn)折出另一種觀點(diǎn)。

　　(4)意為“不期望任何火爆”，介詞短語(yǔ)充當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)，注意此處without的用法。

　　(5)意為“只要”，引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句。

　　(6)插入語(yǔ)。

　　(7)which引導(dǎo)非限制性定于從句。

　　(8)用于引出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，weigh up意為“權(quán)衡”。

　　(9)“be of +n.”相當(dāng)于“be+ adj.”。

　　(10)固定句式：It is...for sb.+ to do sth.其中it是形式主語(yǔ)，不定式短語(yǔ)是實(shí)際的主語(yǔ)。