1.(漢語)對(民族的文化和思維)所產生的影響.

　　note:還要注意一下"思維"的翻譯

　　Reference:the influence of the Chinese language on the cultural and intellectual development of the Chinese nation

　　2.對于這門擁有世界上使用人數最多,文學歷史最悠久的語言來說,這股學習熱潮早該出現(xiàn)了.

　　note:"對于...來說","早該出現(xiàn)了",當指語言的使用人數時候怎么表達

　　Reference:Considering that Chinese has the largest number of speakers in the world and the greatest depth in its literature, this interest is long overdue.

　　3.受到/接受完整的中等教育

　　note:完整的在這里怎么表達?受到接受在這里和教育搭配應該用什么詞?

　　Reference:receive a full secondary education

　　4.顯然這一現(xiàn)象已經影響了全民科學和文化水平的提高,與現(xiàn)代社會格格不入.

　　note:"現(xiàn)象"不一定就是phenomenon,"全民","格格不入"

　　Reference:This fact has obviously affected the improvement of general scientific an cultural levels and is fully incompatible with a modernized society.

　　5.因此,中國在努力發(fā)展經濟的同時必須努力控制人口數量,并且提高人口素質.

　　note:三星句型."在...的同時",動-->名轉換.

　　Reference:Therefore,China's efforts to develop the economy must be accompanied by equally vigorous efforts to control the population and improve its quality.

　　6,人口增長也是中國普及中等教育比較緩慢的一個重要原因.

　　note:原因不一定就是reason,"重要"也不一定就是important,注意這里的特殊句型.

　　Reference:Population increase is also a major factor behind China's relative slowness in establishing universal secondary school education.

　　7.有人認為...

　　Reference:Some people hold the view that...

　　8.然而,更多人認為...

　　note:"認為"的翻譯種種,全掃描

　　Reference:However,more people are of the opinion that...

　　9.深圳應該當好內地與香港之間的橋梁.

　　note:太常用的句型了,不會是失敗.

　　Reference:Shenzhen should continue to play its role as a bridge linking Hong Kong and mainland.

　　10.借助...的優(yōu)勢

　　Reference:make use of the advantages of...