BEC商務(wù)英語(yǔ)中級(jí)改錯(cuò)題歷年真題及答案

　　The Career Forum

　　0 If you work in the city centre then a visit to the Career Forum, is the

　　00 city's most successful recruitment exhibition, will give you the information

　　34 you need to determine whether you are making up the most of yourself.

　　35 Currently, there are advertising many new vacancies on the job market.

　　36 With good skills and a healthy work record in greater demand than ever, it is

　　37 the ideal time to ensure that your career is being on the right track. The Career

　　38 Forum has been responsible for helping many thousands of the people

　　39 improve their job potential, and it can do something the same for you.

　　40 Some of the best jobs in town never reach out the advertising pages, so

　　41 to be considered for one of these top jobs as they become available,

　　42 you will need to make closely contact with the employers' agents. The Career

　　43 Forum is making the perfect opportunity. It is set in an informal atmosphere

　　44 and there is no pressure put; you can choose which agents you talk to.

　　45 So if you are looking for a new job, come and join us at the Career Forum.

　　《The Career Forum》，職業(yè)論壇。這篇文章其實(shí)是一則廣告，為這個(gè)什么職業(yè)論壇做宣傳的。

　　34題，make the most of yourself，固定說法。貌似愛默生的名言：Make the most of yourself,for that is all there is of you。這里UP是多余的。

　　35題，advertising在這里明顯多余。很完整的句子，there主語(yǔ)，are謂語(yǔ)，many new vacancies是賓語(yǔ)，沒有多余的位置給advertising。

　　36題，正確的

　　37題，be on the right track，在正確的軌道上。Being多余。

　　38題，幫助成千的人找到工作。people這里不是特指，前面不需要定冠詞the。

　　39題，do the same for you，固定的說法，為你做同樣的。something是多余的。

　　40題，reach out是伸出援助之手的意思，在這個(gè)句子里不是這個(gè)意思，只是說好的工作從未到達(dá)廣告頁(yè)，所以去掉out。

　　41題，正確的

　　42題，make contact with，如果要用也是用close，不能用closely，去掉

　　43題，making在這里很別扭，一個(gè)完整的主謂賓齊全的句子，forum是主語(yǔ)，is是謂語(yǔ)，opportunity是賓語(yǔ)，沒有多余的地方給making。

　　44題，put在這里也是明顯的多余，放在一個(gè)完整的句子后面充當(dāng)什么成分呢，不倫不類。放在一個(gè)不正式的氣氛下，沒有壓力。Put多余。

　　45題，正確的。