第一講 BEC寫作概述
本課程安排簡介
寫作共6次課，第1次講概述。
BEC寫作簡介：
1 寫作目的與要求
1 Can make notes that are useful to both him/herself and to colleagues.
2 Can write most letters he/she is likely to be asked to do; such errors as occur will not prevent understanding of the message.
3 Can write a simple report.
寫作考試共進行45分鐘，占總成績的25%，小作文占10分，大作文占20分。
更多的報名信息和成績查詢方法請上網(wǎng)了解：www.neea.edu.cn 教育部考試中心
2 測試范圍與選材
1、身份介紹 (Personal Identification)
2、 工作環(huán)境與日常事務 (The office，general business，environment and routine)
3、接待與閑暇活動 (Entertainment of clients，free time，relationships with colleagues and clients)
4、商務旅行 (Travel)
5、健康 (Health)
6、購買與銷售 (Buying and selling)
7、公司結(jié)構(gòu)、系統(tǒng)及程序 (Company structures，systems，processes)
8、產(chǎn)品與服務 (Products and services)
9、成果與成就 (Results and achievements)
其外，還會涉及其他的一般商務話題(Business issues)。
3 測試題型分析
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An Overview of BEC Vantage Writing
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題型： 1.商務便條類; 2.商務便函類;3.商務書信類;4. 商務報告類
注意：BEC不是單純的英語考試，也不是考察商務知識。
對策：學習、模仿高水平的論文
例題解析：
l You work for a company which produces laser printers.You are visiting another company，Softcell, to buy some computer software for your department.They have expressed an interest in your company’s printers and you would like to take twenty brochures and three sample printers with you.
相關(guān)詞匯：laser, inkjet, projector (Barco), photocopier (Xerox), fax machine, scanner, computer, monitor
相關(guān)詞匯：company literature; brochure; leaflet; flyer; white book; data sheet; prospectus
l Write a short note to Mr. Jim Asano，the Sales Manager.
l Asking for his permission to take these items.
l Explaining why you want them.
l Mentioning the time and date when you want to collect them.
Write 40-50 words on your Answer Sheet.
便函便條類題目的結(jié)構(gòu)
Input: situation description
Task: memo, note, email
content points
Write: internal message (40-50 words)
注意：格式;發(fā)揮部分要確切
評分標準
BEC寫作評分方法
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級別 |
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第一部分分數(shù) |
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5 |
全部完成答題要求 l 所有內(nèi)容點都已包括在內(nèi)并在答題要求允許的情況下加以發(fā)揮 l 語言規(guī)范、自然；錯誤最少，均屬小錯。 l 多樣化的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯量。 l 組織效果好，注意前后呼應。 l 語域和格式完全適當。 給讀者的印象極佳。 |
9或10分 |
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4 |
較好的完成答題要求 l 所有內(nèi)容點都處理得不錯。 l 大體準確；運用復雜語言時有錯誤。 l 結(jié)構(gòu)合理，用詞準確。 l 大體上組織較好，注意邏輯關(guān)系。 l 語域和格式總體來說適當。 給讀者的印象良好。 |
7或8分 |
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3 |
尚能達到答題要求 l 所有的主要內(nèi)容點已包括進去，遺漏了一些次要的內(nèi)容。 l 出現(xiàn)一些錯誤，但不妨礙交流。 l 結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯掌握范圍適度。 l 組織和安排總的來說令人滿意。 l 語域和格式尚可，雖然并不完全成功。 給讀者的印象較好。 |
5或6分 |
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2 |
不能完全達到答題要求 l 遺漏了一些主要的內(nèi)容點或者處理得不充分，可能有些不切題。 l 有時錯誤影響清楚交流，錯誤較多，使讀者感到迷惑。 l 結(jié)構(gòu)、詞匯掌握范圍有限。 l 內(nèi)容條理不清、不連貫，造成理解困難。 l 語域和格式不適當。 給讀者的印象不佳。 |
3或4分 |
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1 |
未能達到答題要求 l 顯著的內(nèi)容遺漏/或大量內(nèi)容不相關(guān)，可能由于對題目要求的誤解。 l 嚴重不規(guī)范，經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)基本錯誤。 l 題目要求的結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯幾乎沒有提到。 l 缺乏組織，造成交流失敗。 l 幾乎沒有使用適當?shù)恼Z域和格式。 給讀者的印象極差。 |
1或2分 |
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0 |
什么要求也沒達到。字數(shù)少于所需字數(shù)的25%，或是完全不能辨認或是完全不切題。 |
0分 |
注意：content; accuracy; conciseness
【例題】
l Christmas is coming. Your company is going to hold the annual Christmas party. As the secretary of the general manager, you help arrange the preparation for it.
l Write a memo to all employees.
l Announcing the planned party.
l Welcoming all employees to join it.
l Introducing the programs of it.
l Mention the time and place that it takes place.
l Write 40—50 words on your Answer Sheet.
商務書信類
這一題型要求考生根據(jù)所提供的短文，如書信、傳真、便函、留言條(電話留言條)等，起草一封書信，字數(shù)要求達到120—140詞左右。
題目結(jié)構(gòu)：
Input: 1 situation description
2 task
3 target reader
Reading: texts in note, letter, fax, memo + content points (handwritten notes; second letter)
Write: business letter (120-140 words)
注意英美拼寫問題
【例題】
l You have organised a production conference for your company which will be held on 10 October 2005. The following is the letter of confirmation you received from the Conference Centre.
l Read the letter and fax below, which gives details of the conference.
l Then, using all information from the fax, write your letter to John Smith at the Nuffield Conference Centre, explaining the changes to the arrangements.
l Do not include postal addresses.
l Write 120-140 words on separate sheet.
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Dear Conference Organiser,
I am writing to confirm the arrangements for the conference.
DATE AND TIME: 10th October-10 a.m. to 5 p.m. NUMBER OF GUESTS: 50 ROOMS RESERVED 10 a. m. to 12: 30 p.m. CONFERENCE HALL 3 2 p.m. to 5 p.m. SEMINAR ROOMS 1, 2, and 3 CATERING: Coffee--11 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. Lunch-12:30p.m. to 2p.m. Conference Centre Restaurant Tea-4 p.m.
We look forward to welcoming your company to the Nuffield Conference Centre.
Yours faithfully, |
Today your Production Manager has sent you the fax below with changes he would like to make to the conference arrangements
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FAX I’m afraid we have to make some last-minute changes to the arrangements for our production conference. 1. Ten more guests have accepted. 2. The President wants only one hour for lunch, and just a simple buffet-not seated in the restaurant. The Conference Speaker（Tom Moors）can’t come until 2 pm. So he will give his presentation in the afternoon. Can we move the seminars to the morning? Sorry about this! Sam |
注意：1 不要跑題
2 適當發(fā)揮
3 目標讀者
4 不要抄襲
三種對策：
a 換句型
e.g. This rule applies in every case.
There are no exceptions to the rule. (肯定句變否定句)
b 換同義詞
e.g. The arguments put forward by these two authors are nearly the same.
The views expressed by the two writers are almost identical.
c 改詞性
e.g. The English language has had a major impact on developing other world languages.
Other world languages have been greatly affected by the English language in their developments.
商務報告類
【例題】
l You recently attended a one-day course on office management. Below is the course programme, with the comments you wrote on it.
l Write a short report about the course for your Manager. Include all your comments and say whether your company should send other staff on this course. Write 120-140 words.
l Write on your Answer Sheet. Do not write in capital letters.
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